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I AM WHO I AM (Free verse) by blackthoughtz1
I`m known to devote a time and place within the confines of my mind to deliver such a message in a short period of time. People wish to be in these confines and hope that they maintain this level of maturity. I enlighten the lighten and deliver a message to the inevitable. I am, unique. A question yet to be answered however reveried or contemplated in awe. Some collaborate others thoughts and words to explain a feeling(s) that they do not feel. Some speak wishes and dreams as if they are real and have been tasked to an event in their lives which is untrue. Wisdom comes from the wise in which the wise taught with a slow impedence and craft. Its an art to my thought process in which the wise was right. Confusion is the lock to wisdom. Questions are my key to answers. Answers are instances that work best in better situations. Outside of the box is where I reside and its hard to become personal with a deep person not within their element. From my cerebellum to the nerve endings in my heart, I possess strength in my words.

Up the ladder: Care
Down the ladder: Truth of the Moon

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Arithmetic Mean: 1.3333334
Weighted score: 4.5629225
Overall Rank: 12653
Posted: June 16, 2005 10:54 AM PDT; Last modified: June 16, 2005 12:35 PM PDT
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[3] Bankrupt_Word_Clerk @ 71.129.180.150 | 16-Jun-05/10:59 AM | Reply
paradigm best explains you?

A pattern or model best explains you? huh.. strange. then you say you are outside of the box. cognitively dissonant. hmm.
[0] deleted user @ 81.69.23.196 | 16-Jun-05/4:48 PM | Reply
>>I am, unique.<<
Sigh.
That's as far as I came.
I really wonder why you bother with puncts and comma's and spaces.
[0] deleted user @ 81.69.23.196 | 16-Jun-05/4:49 PM | Reply
By the way, you were outranked ages ago, by Popeye: I yam what I yam.
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