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driven (Free verse) by ThePariahDog
left sometimes hanging, baking
often caught in the twilight between nine and twelve
right on the emergency lever
protecting myself from aggravating nonsense
which puts me on the edge of all out war
touch and go objectives make the waypoints clear
and spur an obsidian chariot forward
devil driven influences enable an inner calmness
that prevails regardless of phenolic squealing
swinging my head to glance behind
emptiness fills a necessary blindspot
surrounding air permissibly drags me to a halt
tires rebelling against the lethargic summer heat
slowing only for hellish signals
persistently barring my expedient passage
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Arithmetic Mean: 1.3333334
Weighted score: 4.5629225
Overall Rank: 12646
Posted: June 9, 2004 1:14 PM PDT; Last modified: June 9, 2004 1:14 PM PDT
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What are you trying, in your own ridiculously long-winded and formless way, to say here? This is clearly about absolutely nothing! What, you went for a drive on a really hot day?
Touch and go objectives????
Devil driven influences inable an inner calmness??
How?
Surrounding air permissisibly drags you? What, do you live at 40 ATMS?
This is hopeless.