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Eulogy for a Poet (Free verse) by Dovina
Up to the mic a poet walks
Frost in his belly
fire in his heart
pictorial at first
his chosen words
an ordinary scene
then changing abruptly
elegant, elite
his first mistake
A touch of melodrama
shows heâs childish
comically untrained
caught in the moment
rush of emotion
perceptively rushed
void of sound structure
not carefully penned
his second mistake
Arrogance and indifference
his third mistake
naïve street poet
ignoring wholesome criticism
repeating mistakes
reading after reading
remaining oblivious
Other mistakes deserve mention
but these most affected his work
through the years
til he died without shame or regret
thinking his verse had grown stronger
not vulnerable and vestigial
not easy prey for savage poets
A delicate thing he was
poet without growth
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.119203
Overall Rank: 5812
Posted: June 16, 2005 11:20 AM PDT; Last modified: June 16, 2005 11:20 AM PDT
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fire in his heart