T. Jonathron Remp
on An A to Z of Tards by Johnnie Baptiste
5 Aug 2005, 2:38 PM
A is for An A to Z of Tards
Not so fast on the patent: the idea was stolen like pancake mix!
Thank you Dovina...a poem like this one has a flow of its own...so i went with the flow...and your right...forcing it would have made it unreal...Bethy :)
Except for "boomed boomingly," flumpet, and the last line, an enjoyed and novel read.
I like this a lot. Is the long quote yours?
Makes a gal wonder, how many guygals do I see in the lady's room.
I like this, but have trouble with the adverb following the noun in the title and in the theme.
A sad sentiment. It would be nice if the rhyming structure of the first verse could be continued in all verses, but it's better not to force it.
Thank you Broken...yes I do know, and I am pleased to see you noticed... Bethy ;)
Thank you Broken...Cheers!!! Bethy:)
hehehe...its a secret....right!!! thanks Bethy:)
Thank you Jon...Bethy :)
Yes Broken...it is sad...sad everyday... Bethy:)
lost for words here...but... yep I like this poem...
Bethy :)
Holy frig...lol...I had to get me a dictionary for some of them big words...but it works for me...awesome...I think like you write...lol...ooops just had an insane moment...lol Bethy:)
Thank you very much Bethy.
: )
Etymology is fun! I look forward to the sequel.
Killin your hoez dog for some street respect is off da chizzle, my nizzle. P.S. Hard Thug Z ain't so hard after awhile, soften him up with a little raspberry ganoush for starters.
Good show *9*
Aww .. this is sad ...