Re: An A to Z of Tards by Johnnie Baptiste	T. Jonathron Remp 128.252.229.185	5-Aug-05/2:38 PM
A is for An A to Z of Tards
Re: a comment on Pilfered Pancakes, Broken Trust by Crann Mascher	T. Jonathron Remp 128.252.229.185	5-Aug-05/2:35 PM
Not so fast on the patent: the idea was stolen like pancake mix!
Re: a comment on Ain,t Life Fuckin Great,(part2 The Stone Man) by Bethy	Bethy 24.222.32.198	5-Aug-05/2:27 PM
Thank you Dovina...a poem like this one has a flow of its own...so i went with the flow...and your right...forcing it would have made it unreal...Bethy :)
Re: Pilfered Pancakes, Broken Trust by Crann Mascher	Dovina 69.175.32.104	5-Aug-05/2:10 PM
Except for "boomed boomingly," flumpet, and the last line, an enjoyed and novel read.
Re: Mavis Beacon, Human. by Crann Mascher	Dovina 69.175.32.104	5-Aug-05/2:03 PM
I like this a lot. Is the long quote yours?
Re: A Night at the Move-ies by Crann Mascher	Dovina 69.175.32.104	5-Aug-05/1:56 PM
Makes a gal wonder, how many guygals do I see in the lady's room.
Re: Coffee Incorrectly by gregsamsa222	Dovina 69.175.32.104	5-Aug-05/1:49 PM
I like this, but have trouble with the adverb following the noun in the title and in the theme.
Re: Ain,t Life Fuckin Great,(part2 The Stone Man) by Bethy	Dovina 69.175.32.104	5-Aug-05/1:46 PM
A sad sentiment. It would be nice if the rhyming structure of the first verse could be continued in all verses, but it's better not to force it.
Re: a comment on The Stone Man by Bethy	Bethy 24.222.32.211	5-Aug-05/12:11 PM
Thank you Broken...yes I do know, and I am pleased to see you noticed... Bethy ;)
Re: a comment on Vain Moment by Bethy	Bethy 24.222.32.211	5-Aug-05/12:06 PM
Thank you Broken...Cheers!!! Bethy:)
Re: a comment on Secret Dream-Thoughts of a Married Man by Bethy	Bethy 24.222.32.211	5-Aug-05/12:04 PM
hehehe...its a secret....right!!! thanks Bethy:)
Re: a comment on Ain,t Life Fuckin Great,(part2 The Stone Man) by Bethy	Bethy 24.222.32.211	5-Aug-05/12:02 PM
Thank you Jon...Bethy :)
Re: a comment on Ain,t Life Fuckin Great,(part2 The Stone Man) by Bethy	Bethy 24.222.32.211	5-Aug-05/12:01 PM
Yes Broken...it is sad...sad everyday... Bethy:)
Re: I”d Kill Your Dog For Respect by Crann Mascher	Bethy 24.222.32.211	5-Aug-05/11:51 AM
lost for words here...but... yep I like this poem... Bethy :)
Re: All are welcomed. by darby pyn	Bethy 24.222.32.211	5-Aug-05/11:44 AM
Holy frig...lol...I had to get me a dictionary for some of them big words...but it works for me...awesome...I think like you write...lol...ooops just had an insane moment...lol Bethy:)
Re: a comment on Tangled web. by darby pyn	darby pyn 207.200.116.197	5-Aug-05/9:47 AM
Thank you very much Bethy. : )
Re: Where did the word "ORIGIN" come from? by T. Jonathron Remp	Crann Mascher 207.252.227.7	5-Aug-05/9:01 AM
Etymology is fun! I look forward to the sequel.
Re: I”d Kill Your Dog For Respect by Crann Mascher	T. Jonathron Remp 128.252.229.185	5-Aug-05/8:57 AM
Killin your hoez dog for some street respect is off da chizzle, my nizzle. P.S. Hard Thug Z ain't so hard after awhile, soften him up with a little raspberry ganoush for starters.
Re: Ain,t Life Fuckin Great,(part2 The Stone Man) by Bethy	T. Jonathron Remp 128.252.229.185	5-Aug-05/8:28 AM
Good show *9*
Re: Ain,t Life Fuckin Great,(part2 The Stone Man) by Bethy	| Broken | 202.156.2.82	5-Aug-05/8:24 AM
Aww .. this is sad ...