Bethy
on Philosophy King by crooked_smile
5 Aug 2005, 8:37 PM
I like this...many different meanings...for me...of course, I am deep anyway..lol
when I was a little girl, my grams said if you look very carefully you can see where the faries have hung out their laundry all over the lawn...and sure enough I did...of course now I tell my little girl the same...look in the morning where the dew hangs on little spider webs...it looks like canopys of laundry...
Beautiful...thanks for bringing back an old memory :) :) Bethy
hae any of you ever hugged a dog?
No.
Dear Me,
Your're insane!
Love always,
You
you make me feel very uncomfortable when you say things like that.
heap of words - yes.
CS Lewis says that even the most ideal cirmstance falls short of providing satisfaction. The best marriage, the best friendship, they all fail to fulfill our wants. It is probable, therefore, he goes on, that only by looking to a force beyond the limitations of humanity can we find satisfaction.
It's been 2600 years since Plato said it. What are we going to do?
A "rambling reflection of thoughts" is how a poem can start.
I think you are undecided on exactly what it is you want to say to him.
Good except for some misspellings.
Mark Abel works out as expected, but the other Mark - who is he?
Funny!
Your last line describes most poems.
ummmmm you wrote this poem...thats a great start...
Heard the term on a travel show. A native in Amsterdam took the host to a cafe, and ordered something. She turned to the host and said, 'That has no translation in English. It more or less translates to 'coffee incorrectly.'" Dunno why, but I like the term, and tried to undercut the awkwardness of it by putting it in quotes the first time its used, hoping to make it seem more like a specific item on the menu...
We all live in a yellow submarine...I,ll see you there...people have become too lost in what is not available...Good poem... Bethy :)