Re: a comment on Quevedo: Psalm by Sasha	Sasha 68.49.8.49	30-Aug-05/8:58 PM
*Snarls* Killjoy!
Re: a comment on The Servant and The Messenger by ALChemy	ALChemy 65.188.89.69	30-Aug-05/7:31 PM
Sarcasm: A cutting, often ironic remark intended to wound. A form of wit that is marked by the use of sarcastic language and is intended to make its victim the butt of contempt or ridicule. I used it in most of my comments to you. Do you always resort to saying Ha Ha! I was just kidding when someone exposes what a true buffoon you are. I've seen you use this cop out before. I assumed you just wanted to try to argue for the sake of arguing and I figured why not considering it's a hell of a lot more creative than your poetry. The fact that your a pathological lier only shows us all how pathetic you truly are. You act as if you convinced me about all your bullshit but any intelligent person who reads all the comments can see at some point I'm just getting bored and tired and just telling you what you want to hear. I will waste no more words on your pretentious diaper wearing "breeches". Later fag.
Re: fastbreaker by calliope	wilco 66.61.101.130	30-Aug-05/7:00 PM
what?
Re: a comment on The Trees in Spring (edit) by Sasha	Sasha 68.49.8.49	30-Aug-05/6:57 PM
I have admited on this very site that I am a pretentious fuck.
Re: Quevedo: Psalm by Sasha	wilco 66.61.101.130	30-Aug-05/6:57 PM
Pretty and a good translation but once again, I just don't think you should get votes for a translation. I stand by it and don't vote.
Re: matrimonal enemy by hendrimike	wilco 66.61.101.130	30-Aug-05/6:55 PM
I agree that the nickel sounds a bit odd. Maybe you could say coin...or put your change in the machine...maybe that would work..otherwise pretty good overall... There's a couple of places that are a little inconsistent and could be a problem if you put it to music...but maybe not...depending on what kind of a song you want it to be.
Re: The Trees in Spring (edit) by Sasha	wilco 66.61.101.130	30-Aug-05/6:46 PM
Your original work is usually pretty good, and this is no exception, but your stuff always seems so pretentious. I guess it's just the way you write...carry on.
Re: matrimonal enemy by hendrimike	hendrimike 70.17.52.234	30-Aug-05/6:46 PM
made subtle changes
Re: Faint Heart by TLRufener	wilco 66.61.101.130	30-Aug-05/6:36 PM
Is this about having a heart attack? Shorten it to about half the length and you might have something.
Re: Present, tense by INTRANSIT	wilco 66.61.101.130	30-Aug-05/6:28 PM
Not your best work, but I like it. Hey, I'm back...isn't everyone glad!
Re: Geraldine Florentine, MD by T. Jonathron Remp	wilco 66.61.101.130	30-Aug-05/6:25 PM
Super. reminds me of early Beck
Re: The Right Thing To Do by Bethy	wilco 66.61.101.130	30-Aug-05/6:23 PM
sexual outer space is horrible. It brings to mind that Sublime song "Date Rape"... I think it could be shortened and made a little less detailed to be more effective.
Re: a comment on Comment Ranker (Favorites) by MacFrantic	MacFrantic 207.200.116.132	30-Aug-05/6:03 PM
Damn it! You forgot your side-order of funny with your shit sandwich. Please, never deliver a low blow like poetry.com though. It disgraces the universe.
Re: a comment on The Right Thing To Do by Bethy	Bethy 24.222.32.194	30-Aug-05/5:18 PM
Thank you INTRANSIT glad you like it...:) Bethy
Re: a comment on The Right Thing To Do by Bethy	Bethy 24.222.32.194	30-Aug-05/5:16 PM
Fiction, and thanks Dovina, :) Bethy
Re: a comment on The Right Thing To Do by Bethy	Bethy 24.222.32.194	30-Aug-05/5:13 PM
I am sorry if I offended you, it is a story, and it is not about me. I am hurt that you would call me a harlot, and unfortunately, I do know shame...I am a decent woman with very good morals, and it does me no good to reveal my personal life...And as far as being dismissed by you with regards to this site...I think not...Thank you for reading my poem :) Bethy
Re: The Right Thing To Do by Bethy	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 81.159.221.190	30-Aug-05/3:44 PM
How dare you sully us with the lurid details of your repulsive love life? You're a disgusting harlot who knows no shame. Get off this site. -0-
Re: Comment Ranker (Favorites) by MacFrantic	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 81.159.221.190	30-Aug-05/3:41 PM
For months now I've been longing for a compendium of your comments, so when this gem oozed its way onto the Most Recent list I could scarcely contain my delight. Each painstakingly selected comment had me doubled up in fits of laughter. It's as if you've trawled through every comment you've ever written, and only chosen the ones that were really, really funny! You should get this published! Have you tried poetry.com?
Re: a comment on Geraldine Florentine, MD by T. Jonathron Remp	INTRANSIT 64.12.116.138	30-Aug-05/3:30 PM
I stand corrected. You are an alien nut.
Re: a comment on The Servant and The Messenger by ALChemy	Dovina 12.72.28.76	30-Aug-05/2:24 PM
Bless you for diligently and humbly seeking truth. May you find peace in your new divinely inspired doctrine, which suppresses your old divinely inspired doctrine. May I suggest the use of an Ecclesiastical Censer in your worship? As its name implies, a censer is an instrument having to do with incense and, particularly in ecclesiastical parlance, its use in the Divine Liturgy. In the Judeo-Christian Tradition, incense has always played an important role (Ex 30:1-8; 37:25-29). The liturgical censer, as you may know from studying these matters, is a metal receptacle, usually bronze, but sometimes gold, in which burning charcoal is placed and over which is poured the incense to be burned. To this receptacle are attached chains, which enable the priest to swing the vessel for the incensation of the Blessed Sacrament. Granulated aromatic resin is usually used to produce a fragrant cloud of smoke, symbolizing prayers rising to God. The use of incense comes into the Church from pagan worship (hence the Church's misgivings concerning it during the first centuries) and, as abundant references to incense in the Old Testament would seem to indicate, from Judaism as well. So, why not apply the musty odor of Mould smoke to your worship, which when mixed with the odors your parishioners, be there any, will maintain a fungal ambiance to the Service.