Re: a comment on Geraldine Florentine, MD by T. Jonathron Remp	T. Jonathron Remp 128.252.229.185	30-Aug-05/1:49 PM
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Re: a comment on The Servant and The Messenger by ALChemy	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 81.159.221.190	30-Aug-05/12:30 PM
I've just realised there are grave errors in my exposition of The Splendour Of Gold Argument. After 12 consecutive hours of frenzied prayer to the Almighty, I have finally born witness to a Revealed Truth: it should have been The Splendour Of Mould Argument. Throughout history man has viewed mould with a sort of awestruck reverence. Arab stable boys used to rub it on their saddle sores to prevent infection. Hundreds of years later this curious habit was cemented in Science, with the discovery of penicillin. There is no way so wondrous a material could exist by chance, without the Holy Carpenter's hands to guide it along its way. As a symbol for God, Mould is a good one.
Re: a comment on Quevedo: Psalm by Sasha	Sasha 68.49.8.49	30-Aug-05/12:30 PM
Well now I know whom to translate.
Re: a comment on The Servant and The Messenger by ALChemy	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 81.159.221.190	30-Aug-05/12:21 PM
I'm glad my points about The Splendour Of Gold, Spiritual Radiation, and Christ's burrowing exploits have led to no small amount of soul-searching on your part. I for one think they're a complete load of bollocks.
Re: Geraldine Florentine, MD by T. Jonathron Remp	INTRANSIT 205.188.116.69	30-Aug-05/11:44 AM
you nut.
Re: The Right Thing To Do by Bethy	INTRANSIT 205.188.116.69	30-Aug-05/11:42 AM
A) Points for "groovy" B) not "naughty bits" instead "bubbies" C) Nice switch at the end
Re: a comment on The Servant and The Messenger by ALChemy	Dovina 12.72.22.255	30-Aug-05/11:34 AM
lol, funniest thing I've read today!
Re: a comment on Present, tense by INTRANSIT	INTRANSIT 205.188.116.198	30-Aug-05/11:34 AM
sposa be sad.
Re: Letters to Silence by MacFrantic	Dovina 12.72.22.255	30-Aug-05/11:28 AM
Yep, it's hard to keep silent. I can feel it! Mostly well said.
Re: The Right Thing To Do by Bethy	Dovina 12.72.22.255	30-Aug-05/11:11 AM
Oh my goodness! Belay that, I feel I have no goodness. What a romp! I want to ask if it's fiction, but won't.
Re: a comment on Present, tense by INTRANSIT	Dovina 12.72.22.255	30-Aug-05/11:05 AM
Okay, kinda funny or sad, could be really grotesque.
Re: a comment on Quevedo: Psalm by Sasha	ALChemy 65.188.89.69	30-Aug-05/6:07 AM
I thought with your ample ability to summon the spirits of bygone poets you'd be able to contact him from the netherworld. Maybe he worshiped death. The first goth poem. By the way you got me really interested in those French Symbolists now.
Re: a comment on hallway by skaskowski	ALChemy 65.188.89.69	30-Aug-05/5:44 AM
Actually your both wrong. It's "Vacuum". Not that I'm the best speller in the world either but I'm Dyslexic and that's not really an excuse but who's gonna pick on a mental gimp right.
Re: a comment on Jack by Dovina	ALChemy 65.188.89.69	30-Aug-05/5:04 AM
I know what a pun is. It just appeared as though you were actually trying to correct her spelling. "And a repairer of breeches too." would have been clearer. Sorry I'll try to recognise the humor the next time.
Re: a comment on Present, tense by INTRANSIT	INTRANSIT 205.188.116.198	30-Aug-05/5:01 AM
Yeah. I knew there was something that needed changing to make this work. the house is now a home.
Re: a comment on Out of a White Hole by ALChemy	ALChemy 65.188.89.69	30-Aug-05/4:34 AM
Thanks. Don't know how I missed "brain's". I dropped the periods at the end of the lines for a cleaner look. I see now I missed one of the little boogers. In the transition I used capital letters to imply the start of a new sentence at the beggining of a line. Maybe I'll have to put all the periods back. I'm glad you liked the first stanza. I spent more time re-editing that first stanza then I did on the rest of the poem.
Re: a comment on Out of a White Hole by ALChemy	ALChemy 65.188.89.69	30-Aug-05/4:19 AM
Originally "It" was "Art" but I felt there was something more mysterious and primal about what I was describing and I wanted the reader to find their own meanings for "It" and the other symbols. I guess "It" could represent the subconscious thought escaping into consciousness. But still I think it goes deeper than that. You’re welcome to give it any meaning you want. I'll wait a few days for more possible suggestions then I'll get to cleaning it up. Thanks again.
Re: Letters to Silence by MacFrantic	nentwined 68.232.253.122	30-Aug-05/1:02 AM
I think I'm too tired. I kind of like this. I might even be able to understand it. I really think I shouldn't be able to understand it.
Re: Present, tense by INTRANSIT	nentwined 68.232.253.122	30-Aug-05/12:52 AM
hm. why the apostrophe on its? I'm seeing this as a puzzle, but I don't see the first bit of string to unravel. I need something more to make it tense, and I'd rather it actually be in present tense. Or I'm missing the cosmic joke, which would not be that unusual...
Re: Present, tense by INTRANSIT	Dovina 17.255.240.138	29-Aug-05/7:30 PM
what? Say again.