Re: a comment on The Servant and The Messenger by ALChemy	ALChemy 65.188.89.69	31-Aug-05/8:28 AM
Yeah that 101 was an obvious cheap shot. My apologies. I think I just went on because the discussion made for a good debate but to argue things like religion and unfathomable numbers seems to lead nowhere because it's about what you believe and not what you can prove. I do sense some kind of spirituality in you. Like a preacher without a religion. For a new topic of debate see my newest poem Out of the White Hole. It's about black holes and the subconscious and has little to do with body orifices. I know that was shameless.
Re: The Right Thing To Do by Bethy	INTRANSIT 152.163.100.67	31-Aug-05/8:20 AM
what the?
Re: The Right Thing To Do by Bethy	INTRANSIT 152.163.100.67	31-Aug-05/8:19 AM
spelling or comma in the last line.
Re: Intrusion by Sasha	INTRANSIT 152.163.100.67	31-Aug-05/8:18 AM
I can't compete with this. But I'll try.
Re: a comment on The Right Thing To Do by Bethy	INTRANSIT 205.188.116.198	31-Aug-05/6:32 AM
Nice to see you in top forme again, btw.
Re: a comment on Summer Song by wilco	INTRANSIT 205.188.116.198	31-Aug-05/6:22 AM
that happens to me too.. apostroHER would have been interesting. lol.
Re: Summer Song by wilco	INTRANSIT 205.188.116.69	31-Aug-05/6:21 AM
Snoop out the pimply parts and it'll roll.
Re: Katrina by jessicazee	INTRANSIT 205.188.116.69	31-Aug-05/6:17 AM
I like the first and second stanzas. 3 needs its lines shuffled and delete the -the- in the fourth, this will connect the two. take a rasp to the english and the end seems to be dangling, unfinished, as if suddenly washed away. ees goot.
Re: a comment on Present, tense by INTRANSIT	INTRANSIT 205.188.116.198	31-Aug-05/6:09 AM
Erm, no. But that's funny! And again I'm close to what I want to say here. damn.
Re: a comment on The Servant and The Messenger by ALChemy	zodiac 212.118.19.76	31-Aug-05/5:51 AM
That's not at all what I'm saying. You can't say the highest number I can think of is 100 so infinity is 101, because that means you can think of 101. The highest number you can think of has to be at least a bajillion for things to start getting interesting. By which I mean, not at all interesting. Regarding the rest of your comment, obviously we're here in some way.
Re: Present, tense by INTRANSIT	zodiac 212.118.19.76	31-Aug-05/5:32 AM
I'm betting you live in a hurricane path, and the windows are now a stained glass driveway. Am I close?
Re: a comment on Wrapping a Gift by Dovina	zodiac 212.118.19.76	31-Aug-05/5:22 AM
Um, okay. But the song's originally by the Pixies on Surfer Rosa. It's a different song when you hear odd, fat Frank Black singing that line.
Re: Lessons(revised) by bellafuego	zodiac 212.118.19.76	31-Aug-05/5:10 AM
Why does the first line have a question mark after it? Would you say you've learned all the things there are to learn in life now? The reason I'm asking is because fifteen minutes before you wrote this poem, you could have written a poem saying Some things I've learned: 2 + 2 = 4, Translation always works, The sky's always blue etc, and been just as wrong. In fact, I imagine you writing this exact same poem every fifteen minutes for the rest of your life and always being exactly the same amount wrong. Wouldn't that be something? What do you think about that?
Re: a comment on The Servant and The Messenger by ALChemy	zodiac 212.118.19.76	31-Aug-05/4:59 AM
I'd like to suggest that you prefer Summum creation theories because, one, the word Summum is kind of funny and fun to say, and, two, because when you say you prefer Summum creation theories people look at you and say 'wow, that's pretty out there, man,' and don't know enough about what your talking about to object. Summum creation is not substantively different from any other creation including the one where the world's on the back of a floating tortoise. And it's high time you admitted that Summum philosophy, both as you've quoted it and as it's actually said, has nothing to do with antimatter, and you just made that part up. As far as nothingness goes (and, despite everything, apparently continues to go), it's silly to say that the potential of nothingness to create something comes from the nothingness itself and not from the something-created. Besides that, there's no reason to believe nothingness ever created anything. Again, that strikes me as something that you believe in so you can believe in God. Which is kind of a backwards way of going about things, if true.
Re: a comment on The Servant and The Messenger by ALChemy	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 81.159.221.190	31-Aug-05/4:28 AM
Yeah that's right. All this time you've just been stringing poor -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. along. That must be why you went mental and started calling him a fag when the penny dropped. Nice one! -10-
Re: a comment on The Right Thing To Do by Bethy	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 81.159.221.190	31-Aug-05/3:06 AM
Last year I was shortlisted for a special Poemeranker Maturity Award. Only those rankers who have demonstrated a sustained commitment to maturity in all aspects of their conduct are allowed to to have one. I hope now you'll realise it's quite within my powers to dismiss whomever I want from this site. I have been in touch with the FBI and they're monitoring the situation. Step out of line again and they'll come down on your ISP like a ton of bricks.
Re: 8/29 by cronus	jessicazee 64.12.116.135	31-Aug-05/12:10 AM
You need a more painful title. 9
Re: Song of the cannonball ( a drinking song) by INTRANSIT	jessicazee 64.12.116.135	30-Aug-05/10:11 PM
I'll kis YOU with a powder burn! What a great line. You had me at "drinking song".
Re: Summer Song by wilco	jessicazee 64.12.116.135	30-Aug-05/10:10 PM
oops - i mispelled "apostrophe" - it still looks wrong?
Re: Summer Song by wilco	jessicazee 64.12.116.135	30-Aug-05/10:09 PM
A few suggestions: put the apostrohe before the s in "summers'"; say more about the girl - what does she look like?; use the word "linger" only once, twice makes me not listen. What I love: "All of the cars, black as they pass by your house"; "Satellites ride across the heavens like stars". 8.7