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8/29 (Free verse) by cronus
do you know how much it hurts to drive by your street instead of up and see his car in the driveway its newer than mine i guess you traded up
Up the ladder: the way things are goin'
Down the ladder: Enlightenment
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.625
Weighted score: 5.1680884
Overall Rank: 4980
Posted: August 28, 2005 10:44 PM PDT; Last modified: August 28, 2005 10:44 PM PDT
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[6] Sasha @ 68.49.8.49 | 29-Aug-05/2:54 AM | Reply
Points for sincerity and novelty. Minus for the i and for not going anywhere with the idea.
[6] LilMsLadyPoet @ 152.163.100.135 | 29-Aug-05/4:01 PM | Reply
(I guess so...bummer!)
[9] jessicazee @ 64.12.116.135 | 31-Aug-05/12:10 AM | Reply
You need a more painful title. 9
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