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Addicted to the agony of waiting for something you love (Free verse) by Mister Cakes Waiting
Sleeping
Working
Longing
Fearing
Waiting again
Loneliness
Hoping
Talking
Meeting
Dancing
But still waiting
Forget what i'm waiting for
Tears
End
Up the ladder:
Mid Years
Down the ladder:
8/29
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Posted: October 15, 2003 3:58 AM PDT; Last modified: October 15, 2003 3:58 AM PDTWeighted score: 5.1680884 Overall Rank: 4982 Comments:
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15-Oct-03/7:50 AM
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This is really excellent stuff. It makes me want to sing a hymn.
I am caught in a whisper, when I try to shout: this is exactly how I've once felt. Eyery word is like a sentence, every sentence like a book. waiting in vain for someone you love...how beautiful sad!
Addicted to writing feeble poetry's more like it.
It's pretty self explanatory? No structure, no point, we've all felt this way, so it's traversing public ground. In other words... Well yeah! Life is like that.
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