poemranker ::Addicted to the agony of waiting for something you love by Mister Cakes

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Free verse № 70366

Addicted to the agony of waiting for something you love

Member since 2002 · Posted 15 Oct 2003 · 4 comments

Waiting Sleeping Working Longing Fearing Waiting again Loneliness Hoping Talking Meeting Dancing But still waiting Forget what i'm waiting for Tears End

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[10] Tits 15-Oct-03/7:50 AM Reply
This is really excellent stuff. It makes me want to sing a hymn.
[n/a] deleted user 15-Oct-03/1:28 PM Reply
I am caught in a whisper, when I try to shout: this is exactly how I've once felt. Eyery word is like a sentence, every sentence like a book. waiting in vain for someone you love...how beautiful sad!
[1] horus8 16-Oct-03/12:28 PM Reply
Addicted to writing feeble poetry's more like it.
[1] horus8 › horus8 16-Oct-03/1:14 PM Reply
It's pretty self explanatory? No structure, no point, we've all felt this way, so it's traversing public ground. In other words... Well yeah! Life is like that.