Re: a comment on The Right Thing To Do by Bethy	Bethy 24.222.32.250	31-Aug-05/10:54 AM
Thank you Jon for your kind comments, I have missed your poetry...nice to see you back...:) Bethy
Re: matrimonal enemy by hendrimike	Bethy 24.222.32.250	31-Aug-05/10:48 AM
by the time I read to the end of this poem/lyric, I was singing it...now it will be in my head all day...lol excellent emotions...:) Bethy *8*
Re: Intrusion by Sasha	Bethy 24.222.32.250	31-Aug-05/10:43 AM
third last line...awesome!!... great words...:) Bethy
Re: Katrina by jessicazee	Bethy 24.222.32.250	31-Aug-05/10:40 AM
good poem, kinda hangs at the end, but good *8* :) Bethy
Re: a comment on The Right Thing To Do by Bethy	Bethy 24.222.32.250	31-Aug-05/10:37 AM
Thankyou Al,:) not in all my life have I ever been called such a hurtful name, D-A,PI, made me cry...not by what he voted(those are just numbers) but the way that he judged me rather than the poem. Writing is like a release on reality, I get to live through other characters. I have fun with creating adventure. Some fiction, some non-fiction. I write about my brother(my twin) and how I am watching him die in front of my eyes,(he is the stone man) and I am his sunshine. I love words...wheather they are spelled right or not, I read everything, and love imagination. I am truly a free spirit. Thank you my friend...:) Bethy
Re: Comment Ranker (Favorites) by MacFrantic	ALChemy 65.188.89.69	31-Aug-05/10:20 AM
Umm... Nevermind.
Re: Dying breed by INTRANSIT	Bethy 24.222.32.250	31-Aug-05/10:16 AM
Excellent! a standing ovation! *10* :) Bethy
Re: Intrusion by Sasha	ALChemy 65.188.89.69	31-Aug-05/10:16 AM
For using the sentence "Wrapped tight as a huge boa round his wood" without refering to a penis I give you -10-
Re: a comment on Dying breed by INTRANSIT	INTRANSIT 205.188.116.198	31-Aug-05/10:00 AM
so I clean up -then- (them) and -waving-(weaving) and then its bridgs. GAH!
Re: The Right Thing To Do by Bethy	T. Jonathron Remp 128.252.229.185	31-Aug-05/9:59 AM
Good and memorable poem
Re: Song of the cannonball ( a drinking song) by INTRANSIT	ALChemy 65.188.89.69	31-Aug-05/9:53 AM
Somewhere between Monty Python and Sponge Bob Square Pants. In some of the lines the cannon ball seems to reveal his gay side don't ya think. The "Aye!" made me laugh out loud and for that a -10-
Re: matrimonal enemy by hendrimike	ALChemy 65.188.89.69	31-Aug-05/9:43 AM
I don't like the word "Mini-van" in any poem.
Re: Dying breed by INTRANSIT	ALChemy 65.188.89.69	31-Aug-05/9:32 AM
I was going to say this is one of the best things I've read in a while but then I noticed you misspelled "bridges" and now it's all just rubbish. So now I have no choice but to reduce your score to a measly -10-
Re: The Right Thing To Do by Bethy	ALChemy 65.188.89.69	31-Aug-05/9:18 AM
Really sweet of you guys. Really.
Re: a comment on The Servant and The Messenger by ALChemy	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 81.159.221.190	31-Aug-05/9:16 AM
You might have a point if my arguments had been even remotely plausible. But come on. The Splendour Of Gold? Spiritual Radiation? Burrowing? Watching Dovina earnestly contest the fundamental principles of The Splendour Of Gold Argument was easily the most whimsical jape of the season. I'm sorry I bothered, now. Actually I'm not at all sorry. Indeed on discovering what a humourless prude you are, my efforts have been made all the more worthwhile. The time to save face has long gone, my lad. I fear your trousers have now fallen so far down that they've turned inside out and are dangling from your poulaines. Yours sincerely, "He who is Exceedingly Splendid"
Re: a comment on The Servant and The Messenger by ALChemy	ALChemy 65.188.89.69	31-Aug-05/8:52 AM
This last comment from you came like 2 seconds after I posted mine. My god your obsessed.
Re: a comment on The Servant and The Messenger by ALChemy	ALChemy 65.188.89.69	31-Aug-05/8:49 AM
Don't you think that everyone knows you start arguments just for the sake of arguing. The fact that you have to lie and make pranks to feel superior is what disappoints me. I like debating. It's like a mental sport. What you do is let the other team score and then say "Well, I wasn't really trying anyway. Even now I know what I'm saying is falling on deaf ears but at least I can say I tried to help. That's all I wanted to do. Sorry I bothered.
Re: The Right Thing To Do by Bethy	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 81.159.221.190	31-Aug-05/8:41 AM
I have just been contacted by the FBI and they informed me of the changes you made to your (once lewd) poeme. You'll be pleased to know they've accepted the rewording and will not be pursuing the matter any further. Kind regards, -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
Re: a comment on The Servant and The Messenger by ALChemy	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 81.159.221.190	31-Aug-05/8:37 AM
Gee you've really made me see the error of my ways.
Re: a comment on The Servant and The Messenger by ALChemy	ALChemy 65.188.89.69	31-Aug-05/8:30 AM
No just wanted you to see what your tactics sound like.