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Faint Heart (Free verse) by TLRufener
The room is spinning
Iâm feeling faint
I only hope that
Itâs not too late
My heart is pounding
Against my ribs
The pain is bad
I hope it doesnât give
The world is loosing
Itâs hold on me
My strength is failing
Itâs hard to breathe
My mind is a blur
Sound is fading fast
The light is leaving
It doesnât seem to last
My eyes are closing
My feeling is gone
I canât leave
Iâm not done yet
The pain is growing
I start to cry
The fear is rising
I donât want to die
I feel so cold
They say Iâm so warm
How can that be
My mind is torn
They ask me questions
I can barely speak
I have lost control
Iâm so weak
My hear is slowing
My eyes begin to close
If Iâll wake up
Nobody knows
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.6666667
Weighted score: 4.8410625
Overall Rank: 10710
Posted: August 29, 2005 10:51 AM PDT; Last modified: August 29, 2005 10:51 AM PDT
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