| Re: On Youth Revisited by vulcan |
SupremeDreamer 69.236.82.255 |
29-Apr-08/3:16 AM |
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| Re: I had no idea it could be so good by A. Nomaly |
Dental Panic 87.209.75.3 |
29-Apr-08/1:19 AM |
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I like it too.
Great works on your homepage.
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| Re: I had no idea it could be so good by A. Nomaly |
jessicazee 24.160.246.73 |
28-Apr-08/9:36 PM |
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This might be better in 4 lines:
circumstance and one gone away
in the next room, zebra stripped, cat
for a dream
and some Taurus, blank
or I don't know. I liked it so much I re-typed it. 9. Don't you miss the loudness of the electric typrwriter?
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| Re: a comment on wam bam by malpaso |
Dan garcia-Black 69.237.237.110 |
28-Apr-08/8:38 AM |
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| Re: a comment on wam bam by malpaso |
malpaso 70.233.147.84 |
27-Apr-08/8:15 PM |
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I'm calling the USA a victim of its own government which is a government of the corporations by the corporations and for the corporations, one nation under Wall Street, libery and justice for the power elite.
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| Re: People write funny things by Garrett S Sexton |
Dan garcia-Black 69.238.211.228 |
26-Apr-08/12:38 AM |
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Puddles of bloody poodles could be a follow-up.
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| Re: look upon my works by nentwined |
Dan garcia-Black 69.238.211.228 |
26-Apr-08/12:33 AM |
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Quote the maven, "Nevermore!"
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| Re: wam bam by malpaso |
Dan garcia-Black 69.238.211.228 |
26-Apr-08/12:29 AM |
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Are you calling the USA a bottom?
Vaseline (another petroleum product)will break the condom. Better to use butt-er.
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| Re: On Youth Revisited by vulcan |
Dan garcia-Black 69.238.211.228 |
26-Apr-08/12:23 AM |
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My new face is...younger than before...a chaos
Of Nightingales and flow'rs.
Yeah. Works for me.
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| Re: a comment on Breathless by misused |
misused 76.192.229.12 |
22-Apr-08/8:20 PM |
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| Re: Go Ahead by misused |
daggatolar 41.219.236.75 |
22-Apr-08/9:01 AM |
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Mom please don't heed this poem
don,t go ahead anymore.
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| Re: Reaper's Chain by Ladybama9425 |
daggatolar 41.219.221.19 |
22-Apr-08/8:43 AM |
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womanhood in starked nakedness !
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| Re: a comment on Teaching Beetles To Swim by Bobjim |
some deleted user 208.102.30.51 |
21-Apr-08/6:17 PM |
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FWIW, Autism is not a mental illness. People with Autism are not retarded, either, before you try that one.
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| Re: a comment on slice of moonlight by lmp |
lmp 141.154.134.3 |
21-Apr-08/4:46 PM |
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if you read certain other works of mine, you will discern that there are more than he for which this was written.
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| Re: a comment on light [edited] by lmp |
lmp 141.154.134.3 |
21-Apr-08/4:39 PM |
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the grapefriuts' skin does fade next to the luster of light upon the lover's skin...
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| Re: Breathless by misused |
forsaken 210.216.58.105 |
20-Apr-08/10:50 AM |
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| Re: People write funny things by Garrett S Sexton |
Garrett S Sexton 86.158.6.121 |
12-Apr-08/10:26 AM |
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| Re: Me by berdabear |
berdabear 207.200.116.9 |
10-Apr-08/12:39 PM |
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I found him! All he needs is me, and I am sooo all! This one has now been published several times and I am reminded each time I see it that dreams can become reality!
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| Re: Confusion by berdabear |
berdabear 207.200.116.9 |
10-Apr-08/12:36 PM |
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"uncontrolled thoughts" so very true. I comment on my own work in reflection. Self hatred, confustion, destruction, addiction. I made that change, I dumped all addiction, clean and sober for over two years now. Still random in my mind but no longer clouded with destructive addiction. What a grim reminder of where I used to be.
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| Re: The Mirror by berdabear |
berdabear 207.200.116.9 |
10-Apr-08/12:32 PM |
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Its been nearly 5 years since I wrote this. If you take a moment to read my latest submission you'll find my attitude has changed dramatically. Thank god and the few who have really loved me!
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