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I had no idea it could be so good (Free verse) by A. Nomaly
circumstance and one gone away in the next room, zebra stripped, cat for a dream and some Taurus, blank

Up the ladder: Hope in a Bottle
Down the ladder: time (3rd draft)

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.5
Weighted score: 4.976287
Overall Rank: 8277
Posted: April 28, 2008 5:25 PM PDT; Last modified: April 28, 2008 5:25 PM PDT
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[9] jessicazee @ 24.160.246.73 | 28-Apr-08/9:36 PM | Reply
This might be better in 4 lines:

circumstance and one gone away
in the next room, zebra stripped, cat
for a dream
and some Taurus, blank

or I don't know. I liked it so much I re-typed it. 9. Don't you miss the loudness of the electric typrwriter?
[n/a] Dental Panic @ 87.209.75.3 | 29-Apr-08/1:19 AM | Reply
I like it too.
Great works on your homepage.
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