I had no idea it could be so good

by A. Nomaly

Member since 2002 · Posted 28 Apr 2008 · 2 comments

circumstance and one gone away in the next room, zebra stripped, cat for a dream and some Taurus, blank

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[9] jessicazee 28-Apr-08/9:36 PM Reply

This might be better in 4 lines:

circumstance and one gone away
in the next room, zebra stripped, cat
for a dream
and some Taurus, blank

or I don't know. I liked it so much I re-typed it. 9. Don't you miss the loudness of the electric typrwriter?

[n/a] Dental Panic 29-Apr-08/1:19 AM Reply

I like it too.
Great works on your homepage.