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I had no idea it could be so good (Free verse) by A. Nomaly

circumstance and one gone away in the next room, zebra stripped, cat for a dream and some Taurus, blank

jessicazee 28-Apr-08/9:36 PM
This might be better in 4 lines:

circumstance and one gone away
in the next room, zebra stripped, cat
for a dream
and some Taurus, blank

or I don't know. I liked it so much I re-typed it. 9. Don't you miss the loudness of the electric typrwriter?




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