CommentsComments 14581–14600 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

ALChemy replying on I LOVE A PROSTITUTE by Bhaskaryya 9 Nov 2005, 7:47 AM
You do have potential.
ALChemy replying on Sleep by ALChemy 9 Nov 2005, 7:46 AM
Oh a warning. If you nitpick little things like spelling in peoples comments and replies (unless for comedic reasons like when for instance a girl writes calk when what she really wants is cock) then folks will stop bothering to talk to you altogether. Which may or may not explain your popularity in your personal life.
zodiac on Forgive Me by TLRufener 9 Nov 2005, 7:28 AM
You are here because someone told you you need to ask forgiveness for practically everything you do. Now that you have an answer, I hope you'll consider getting off your knees and going outside.
zodiac replying on I LOVE A PROSTITUTE by Bhaskaryya 9 Nov 2005, 7:20 AM
Yes, I understand that. As far as Mary Magdalene goes, I'll go ahead and guess you love the redeemed Mary Magdalene, and not Mary Magdalene while she was actually whoring. I don't think it's fair to call her a prostitute after her redemption. Supposing you DO love the unredeemed Mary Magdalene - well, I just don't think you can love someone whom you want to redeem. I think that means you love some idea of what she or he will become, and not the person as she or he is. You're welcome to disagree. That's also one of my biggest problems with Christianity - probably coming from the Christian belief in a soul that somehow exists above and uncomplicit in sin. Like THE REAL MAGDALENE is a nice, beautiful person just kind of floating around while the Unreal, Earthly Magdalene does all this whoring. I just don't buy it. Like I said, feel free to disagree.
ALChemy replying on the band by celticskatermatt1 9 Nov 2005, 7:07 AM
Just wait till you hit 30 my friend.
ALChemy replying on I LOVE A PROSTITUTE by Bhaskaryya 9 Nov 2005, 7:03 AM
There's no concrete evidence to support Mary Magdalene was even a prostitute. It's just as likely she was the mother of The Christ's child that is if you choose to be at the other gullible end of the spectrum. Hey, I've come to realize that just about every Indian (is that the right term) I've met has had a better english vocabulary then most southerners. I myself don't know a damn word of indian.
zodiac replying on the band by celticskatermatt1 9 Nov 2005, 7:01 AM
That's odd. You'd think if I were 18 I'd have denied being 26, a disgraceful age if there ever was one. Of course, what it really comes down to is, I've currently acheived the happiness I grew up thinking I was entitled to. Can you say that?
zodiac replying on Posted Pelicans by Dovina 9 Nov 2005, 6:58 AM
You're right. How could I have missed such a big part of our conversations? DOVINA: You're getting off topic. ZODIAC: I think that about covers it.
Bhaskaryya on Sleep by ALChemy 9 Nov 2005, 6:56 AM
The poem ofcourse is great but you've used 10+ syllables in a few line. Don't they break out of the pentameter? And just couldn't resist nitpicking on this bit of a comment by you. "actually excepted as a word" Isn't that supposed to be 'accepted'?
zodiac replying on Sonata for Robin and Poet by Dovina 9 Nov 2005, 6:56 AM
It's good you find budding appreciation. I've been trying to project a certain wry ambivalence tinged with disgust.
zodiac replying on Steak and Satin by Dovina 9 Nov 2005, 6:55 AM
PS-Can I ask you a question? Do you believe - that is, will you say, today, irrespective of past conversations - that the black race is the most different from the white race? Imagine if you will a blank slate. Yes, I'm letting previous topics go, but you have to admit we didn't seem to be getting anywhere on those. The new topic is the question posed above.
zodiac replying on Steak and Satin by Dovina 9 Nov 2005, 6:52 AM
You've been here long enough to know when -=Dark_Angel=-,P.I. says 'I'm racist' he really means 'you're racist.' No excuses for not getting that one.
zodiac replying on Sonata for Robin and Poet by Dovina 9 Nov 2005, 6:51 AM
Yeah, I know. I just said it wasn't her best, which is true. In my opinion, her best is either "Math Poem 3" or "Returning". Oh, I also said Dovina's poetry about snooty poets not being in touch with the world is crap. You're perfectly free to say I just think so because I'm a snooty poet. Now I'll say I admit to being elitist. Elites tend, on average, to be better than Sorries at many things I deem important. That's why they're elites.
Bhaskaryya on Sonata for Robin and Poet by Dovina 9 Nov 2005, 6:49 AM
Why hold a candle in a bright blue day? Anyway, this was light-hearted and funny. A great read! I loved the 3rd and 4th stanzas especially!
zodiac replying on To The Modern Black Standard by ALChemy 9 Nov 2005, 6:42 AM
It's shameful. She comes from Tennessee, but obviously one of the all-white parts. Now she lives in the most segregated state in America - California.
Bhaskaryya replying on I LOVE A PROSTITUTE by Bhaskaryya 9 Nov 2005, 6:38 AM
Thanks a lot for commenting. "Prostitute' here was more inclined toward Mary Magdalene. There are few more metaphorical elements within the poem (including the structure too) but I guess that's for the reader to figure out! :)
cyan9 on Forgive Me by TLRufener 9 Nov 2005, 5:56 AM
Shows the humility and neediness of a prayer for assistance with simplicity and accuracy.
ALChemy on Alone With Memories by Mona Lisa 8 Nov 2005, 3:25 PM
Is this you? http://www.rame.net/aarle/pics/MonaLisa.jpg If so, Bravo.
Dovina on I LOVE A PROSTITUTE by Bhaskaryya 8 Nov 2005, 2:48 PM
Yeah, love the unlovable and thumb your nose at those who sneer. Then take her, as in the last line, and drive far away.
Dovina replying on Sonata for Robin and Poet by Dovina 8 Nov 2005, 2:35 PM
Probably not, I haven't smelled it.