| Re: a comment on the band by celticskatermatt1 |
Dovina 69.175.32.104 |
8-Nov-05/12:18 PM |
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Please notice the sequence. I was not talking to you.
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| Re: a comment on The Other by Caducus |
ALChemy 24.74.101.159 |
8-Nov-05/12:16 PM |
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What, you've never played Mr Turtle come out of your shell?
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| Re: a comment on the band by celticskatermatt1 |
ALChemy 24.74.101.159 |
8-Nov-05/12:14 PM |
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Don't worry I'm of legal age for consent;)
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| Re: The Other by Caducus |
Dovina 69.175.32.104 |
8-Nov-05/11:30 AM |
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The last verse is especially nice. Low skirt, at arms length, closer now.
The tortise image is hard to imagine, but the rest of Verse 1 makes the scene clear.
Verse 3 seems contorted as if Line 4 should be Line 2.
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| Re: a comment on the band by celticskatermatt1 |
Dovina 69.175.32.104 |
8-Nov-05/10:32 AM |
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| Re: a comment on Steak and Satin by Dovina |
Dovina 69.175.32.104 |
8-Nov-05/10:27 AM |
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The original topic of this conversation is not whether -=Dark_Angel=-,P.I. is racist. Try again, and actually read this time.
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| Re: a comment on Posted Pelicans by Dovina |
Dovina 69.175.32.104 |
8-Nov-05/10:24 AM |
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| Re: a comment on Sonata for Robin and Poet by Dovina |
Dovina 69.175.32.104 |
8-Nov-05/10:22 AM |
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Thanks Mona. That goes for all who do not admit to being masters.
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| Re: a comment on Sonata for Robin and Poet by Dovina |
Dovina 69.175.32.104 |
8-Nov-05/10:22 AM |
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Thanks Z. The writing of crap poetry has been my goal for a long time now. Itâs good to find some budding appreciation.
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| Re: a comment on Sonata for Robin and Poet by Dovina |
Dovina 69.175.32.104 |
8-Nov-05/10:21 AM |
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| Re: a comment on Sonata for Robin and Poet by Dovina |
Dovina 69.175.32.104 |
8-Nov-05/10:20 AM |
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Okay, it was a weak girlish kick. I will try again only after you kick back with a genuine comment on the poem.
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| Re: a comment on Sonata for Robin and Poet by Dovina |
Mona Lisa 172.212.241.153 |
8-Nov-05/8:25 AM |
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Ahh come on this is no way crap none of us admit to being elitist we just do our best.
We're all training here and who knows maybe an apprentice can become a master.
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| Re: a comment on Sonata for Robin and Poet by Dovina |
INTRANSIT 204.110.228.205 |
8-Nov-05/7:45 AM |
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We are. We pay tax at the pump and then a road -use tax based on the amount of miles driven in each state. The highways were originally designed to allow our military quick movement around the country. Secondly as intrastate and interstate commerce, trucking. Thirdly, recreation. You have been double trumped. please try again.
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| Re: The Embrowning by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
Caducus 172.212.241.153 |
8-Nov-05/6:55 AM |
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| Re: "46 million babies a year" by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. |
Caducus 172.212.241.153 |
8-Nov-05/6:54 AM |
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Edward Longshanks once said of the scottish cad william wallace
"A man does himself good business when he rids himself of a turd"
Vintage.
Love the bit about the coward and a brush. What is the inspiration behind your poemes of poo?
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| Re: a comment on To The Modern Black Standard by ALChemy |
ALChemy 24.74.101.159 |
8-Nov-05/6:49 AM |
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Maybe we should great each other by saying "Well hello there honky and how are you this fine day."
True but Dovina still doesn't seem to understand how them negroes are.
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| Re: Farm animals by INTRANSIT |
Caducus 172.212.241.153 |
8-Nov-05/6:47 AM |
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Check you out with your gift of ghazal sheesh this i sgood - love the image on the butcher.
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| Re: a comment on the band by celticskatermatt1 |
ALChemy 24.74.101.159 |
8-Nov-05/6:42 AM |
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And for the next few years have Just about the greatest gosh darn boss the world has ever been fortunate enough to know. GWB.
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| Re: a comment on The Other by Caducus |
Caducus 172.212.241.153 |
8-Nov-05/6:41 AM |
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I think you're right about dropping fridays i just stood up with my barotone voice and it sounded better.
Actually I read it with my best nicholas cage voice
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| Re: a comment on To The Modern Black Standard by ALChemy |
zodiac 217.144.7.195 |
8-Nov-05/6:39 AM |
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Yeah, so basically if you're holding your breath for people without prejudice or dirty slang, you're going to asphyxiate. Besides, everyone knows black people's personalities are pathological, so it's not their fault. What's whitey's excuse? He was trying to be like black people.
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