CommentsComments 14601–14620 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

Dovina replying on The Other by Caducus 8 Nov 2005, 2:34 PM
My bad - turtle envy?
Dovina replying on Alone With Memories by Mona Lisa 8 Nov 2005, 2:32 PM
I looked at your homepage. You are from England with blond hair. This must be about someone else.
Dovina on Alone With Memories by Mona Lisa 8 Nov 2005, 2:30 PM
Why did he go into the bathroom grey? And why the British spelling of gray? Wasn't this in the morning? In evening he might be gray with dirt. "had heard" could be just heard.
ALChemy replying on The Other by Caducus 8 Nov 2005, 1:50 PM
Silly, only boys have a Mr Turtle.
ALChemy replying on Sonata for Robin and Poet by Dovina 8 Nov 2005, 1:30 PM
I didn't omit you from the genre. But admit it. No body does crap like DA.
ALChemy replying on the band by celticskatermatt1 8 Nov 2005, 1:15 PM
Dough!! My bad.
Dovina replying on Sonata for Robin and Poet by Dovina 8 Nov 2005, 12:23 PM
Read "Lady Bradbury's Excursion" then reconsider.
ALChemy replying on Sonata for Robin and Poet by Dovina 8 Nov 2005, 12:21 PM
That would be DA's genre.
Dovina replying on The Other by Caducus 8 Nov 2005, 12:19 PM
No, I've always remained sheltered, shelled perhaps.
Dovina replying on the band by celticskatermatt1 8 Nov 2005, 12:18 PM
Please notice the sequence. I was not talking to you.
ALChemy replying on The Other by Caducus 8 Nov 2005, 12:16 PM
What, you've never played Mr Turtle come out of your shell?
ALChemy replying on the band by celticskatermatt1 8 Nov 2005, 12:14 PM
Don't worry I'm of legal age for consent;)
Dovina on The Other by Caducus 8 Nov 2005, 11:30 AM
The last verse is especially nice. Low skirt, at arms length, closer now. The tortise image is hard to imagine, but the rest of Verse 1 makes the scene clear. Verse 3 seems contorted as if Line 4 should be Line 2.
Dovina replying on the band by celticskatermatt1 8 Nov 2005, 10:32 AM
Are you like 18?
Dovina replying on Steak and Satin by Dovina 8 Nov 2005, 10:27 AM
The original topic of this conversation is not whether -=Dark_Angel=-,P.I. is racist. Try again, and actually read this time.
Dovina replying on Posted Pelicans by Dovina 8 Nov 2005, 10:24 AM
Obviously not!
Dovina replying on Sonata for Robin and Poet by Dovina 8 Nov 2005, 10:22 AM
Thanks Mona. That goes for all who do not admit to being masters.
Dovina replying on Sonata for Robin and Poet by Dovina 8 Nov 2005, 10:22 AM
Thanks Z. The writing of crap poetry has been my goal for a long time now. It’s good to find some budding appreciation.
Dovina replying on Sonata for Robin and Poet by Dovina 8 Nov 2005, 10:21 AM
Thanks, C.
Dovina replying on Sonata for Robin and Poet by Dovina 8 Nov 2005, 10:20 AM
Okay, it was a weak girlish kick. I will try again only after you kick back with a genuine comment on the poem.