CommentsComments 14621–14640 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

Mona Lisa replying on Sonata for Robin and Poet by Dovina 8 Nov 2005, 8:25 AM
Ahh come on this is no way crap none of us admit to being elitist we just do our best. We're all training here and who knows maybe an apprentice can become a master.
INTRANSIT replying on Sonata for Robin and Poet by Dovina 8 Nov 2005, 7:45 AM
We are. We pay tax at the pump and then a road -use tax based on the amount of miles driven in each state. The highways were originally designed to allow our military quick movement around the country. Secondly as intrastate and interstate commerce, trucking. Thirdly, recreation. You have been double trumped. please try again.
Caducus on The Embrowning by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 8 Nov 2005, 6:55 AM
bowel moving
Edward Longshanks once said of the scottish cad william wallace "A man does himself good business when he rids himself of a turd" Vintage. Love the bit about the coward and a brush. What is the inspiration behind your poemes of poo?
ALChemy replying on To The Modern Black Standard by ALChemy 8 Nov 2005, 6:49 AM
Maybe we should great each other by saying "Well hello there honky and how are you this fine day." True but Dovina still doesn't seem to understand how them negroes are.
Caducus on Farm animals by INTRANSIT 8 Nov 2005, 6:47 AM
Check you out with your gift of ghazal sheesh this i sgood - love the image on the butcher.
ALChemy replying on the band by celticskatermatt1 8 Nov 2005, 6:42 AM
And for the next few years have Just about the greatest gosh darn boss the world has ever been fortunate enough to know. GWB.
Caducus replying on The Other by Caducus 8 Nov 2005, 6:41 AM
I think you're right about dropping fridays i just stood up with my barotone voice and it sounded better. Actually I read it with my best nicholas cage voice
zodiac replying on To The Modern Black Standard by ALChemy 8 Nov 2005, 6:39 AM
Yeah, so basically if you're holding your breath for people without prejudice or dirty slang, you're going to asphyxiate. Besides, everyone knows black people's personalities are pathological, so it's not their fault. What's whitey's excuse? He was trying to be like black people.
ALChemy replying on To The Modern Black Standard by ALChemy 8 Nov 2005, 6:34 AM
I've worked in constuction too. Which either counter-acts that or makes me one of the Village People. Imagine if they knew I wrote poetry?
zodiac replying on the band by celticskatermatt1 8 Nov 2005, 6:29 AM
Everything I've done I've done either by incurring huge expense or commiting myself to dozens of things I wasn't ready for and only being halfway decent at any of them. If I had it to do again, I'd join the army.
zodiac replying on the band by celticskatermatt1 8 Nov 2005, 6:27 AM
PS-AlChemy's comment above is really good. Please pay attention to it.
zodiac replying on I LOVE A PROSTITUTE by Bhaskaryya 8 Nov 2005, 6:23 AM
That aside, I'm with richa. Precocious.
zodiac on I LOVE A PROSTITUTE by Bhaskaryya 8 Nov 2005, 6:22 AM
1) You can't love someone by wanting to return her innocence and respect. That means you love someone with innocence and respect who she is not - yet. 2) You can be pretty sure she doesn't love you. Or even feel you, technically.
ALChemy replying on the band by celticskatermatt1 8 Nov 2005, 6:17 AM
Your 26? Damn I'm an under achiever.
zodiac on Sonata for Robin and Poet by Dovina 8 Nov 2005, 6:11 AM
Not your best. I suggest you seem to know a lot about how poets think and act while simultaneously holding the belief that poetry is not something requiring training, effort, or skill while simultaneously writing crap poetry about it.
zodiac replying on the band by celticskatermatt1 8 Nov 2005, 6:06 AM
You wanna know how we knew you were 13? Cause you say stupid shit like "Im sorry If a person with a higher intelect, as yourself, can not accept a poem that tells a story". What patent crap. Obviously his disliking you has nothing to do with whether your poem tells or story or not, or even whether or not it tells a story we understand. Besides, of course we understand. We've all been 13 once, while you haven't been 26 yet. I don't mean to be negative, just don't say stuff like that anymore. And go out and try to have some, you know, experiences and stuff.
ALChemy replying on To The Modern Black Standard by ALChemy 8 Nov 2005, 6:05 AM
Already forgiven.
ALChemy replying on To The Modern Black Standard by ALChemy 8 Nov 2005, 6:04 AM
Even more so.
zodiac replying on To The Modern Black Standard by ALChemy 8 Nov 2005, 6:02 AM
The fact that you've studied art means some white person somewhere is surely calling you a faggot right now. You must really hate white people, too.