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on The Other by Caducus
8 Nov 2005, 6:02 AM
I think you should drop "on fridays" to help the rhythm of the poem flow better.
Feels like the melancholy you see in a lot of those indie films.
Bed tortoise: Great image.
You can really tell the wording was well thought out.
Please forgive richa. He's a very nice guy who simply can't help getting in fights with people he essentially agrees with whilst online. I think it's something to do with the limitations of written language.
I'm afraid the preceding comment contains all 100% of what you've said.
If you believe the black race is the most different from the white race, you are a racist. The original topic of this conversation is whether -=Dark_Angel=-,P.I. is racist or you actually are. I don't see how I could be more cogent. In addition, your insistence on talking about whether or not I'm talking about side issues is itself a side issue, and of no importance.
How's that for irony?
Thank you. I hope those ideas don't get you in trouble.
Thank you. You saved me the effort of arguing genius.
I got some ideas from this - inspiring and bar raising.
Credit where its due this is the best I've seen from you and deserves comments.
I see a lot of control in this and the language form is a detraction from your usual style.
In a word - graceful.
Actually come to think of it I did mean all black people when I said "When black people stop calling each other Pimp, Nigga etc."
Would you rather some black people stop doing it and some continue or all of them stop doing it. Yes, some already don't but their automatically include into the all that don't. I will concede "Stop" should have been "aren't". It must be the racist in me slipping out again. You really should admit you're knit-picking at this.
Of course it is all black people. Black is a term that refers to all black people. Do you think black swan refers to all black swans except peter the black swan. Are you mad.
That you write a poem to be anti-racist and because of your own racism it turns out to be appallingly racist is ironic. It is not ironic when I comment you fail. By the way don't you think rain on your wedding day is ironic. I do.
A poem mocking and criticizing racist stereotyping appears racist to you. How is that not ironic.
Irony: An expression or utterance marked by a deliberate contrast between apparent and intended meaning.
Or maybe your definition is "like ra-a-ain on your wedding day..."
If it was all black people I would have said ALL black people genius.
No surprise you say "writing a witty comeback against an ass" seeing your head is stuck so far up yours that you don't know when to give up. Or is your idea to clog up my poem's comment section with your inane filibustering until I finally start deleting them and then say "Ha! See.
Don't bother. Unlike you I can move on from criticism.
Well written. Get rid of the inversion (I shall hesitate not etc) and the I'e whatever that means and the whom. You are quite the precocious talent.
What do I get from writing a witty comeback against an ass. Oh, glory me, I have defeated an ass.
Is it all black people that talk like that. Is we will talk when black people stop doing x a reasonable response to a black person who has never said bitch in his life.
That is not ironic.
"Roxanne! You don't have to put on the red light..."
Your use of whom is pretentious and wrong. See usage note: http://dictionary.reference.com/search?q