Re: a comment on To The Modern Black Standard by ALChemy	ALChemy 24.74.101.159	8-Nov-05/5:06 AM
Actually come to think of it I did mean all black people when I said "When black people stop calling each other Pimp, Nigga etc." Would you rather some black people stop doing it and some continue or all of them stop doing it. Yes, some already don't but their automatically include into the all that don't. I will concede "Stop" should have been "aren't". It must be the racist in me slipping out again. You really should admit you're knit-picking at this.
Re: a comment on To The Modern Black Standard by ALChemy	richa 81.178.246.176	8-Nov-05/4:35 AM
Of course it is all black people. Black is a term that refers to all black people. Do you think black swan refers to all black swans except peter the black swan. Are you mad.
Re: a comment on To The Modern Black Standard by ALChemy	richa 81.178.246.176	8-Nov-05/4:33 AM
That you write a poem to be anti-racist and because of your own racism it turns out to be appallingly racist is ironic. It is not ironic when I comment you fail. By the way don't you think rain on your wedding day is ironic. I do.
Re: a comment on To The Modern Black Standard by ALChemy	ALChemy 24.74.101.159	8-Nov-05/4:24 AM
A poem mocking and criticizing racist stereotyping appears racist to you. How is that not ironic. Irony: An expression or utterance marked by a deliberate contrast between apparent and intended meaning. Or maybe your definition is "like ra-a-ain on your wedding day..."
Re: a comment on To The Modern Black Standard by ALChemy	ALChemy 24.74.101.159	8-Nov-05/4:15 AM
If it was all black people I would have said ALL black people genius.
Re: a comment on To The Modern Black Standard by ALChemy	ALChemy 24.74.101.159	8-Nov-05/4:13 AM
No surprise you say "writing a witty comeback against an ass" seeing your head is stuck so far up yours that you don't know when to give up. Or is your idea to clog up my poem's comment section with your inane filibustering until I finally start deleting them and then say "Ha! See. Don't bother. Unlike you I can move on from criticism.
Re: I LOVE A PROSTITUTE by Bhaskaryya	richa 81.178.246.176	8-Nov-05/4:12 AM
Well written. Get rid of the inversion (I shall hesitate not etc) and the I'e whatever that means and the whom. You are quite the precocious talent.
Re: a comment on To The Modern Black Standard by ALChemy	richa 81.178.246.176	8-Nov-05/3:59 AM
What do I get from writing a witty comeback against an ass. Oh, glory me, I have defeated an ass.
Re: a comment on To The Modern Black Standard by ALChemy	richa 81.178.246.176	8-Nov-05/3:57 AM
Is it all black people that talk like that. Is we will talk when black people stop doing x a reasonable response to a black person who has never said bitch in his life.
Re: a comment on To The Modern Black Standard by ALChemy	richa 81.178.246.176	8-Nov-05/3:53 AM
That is not ironic.
Re: I LOVE A PROSTITUTE by Bhaskaryya	ALChemy 24.74.101.159	8-Nov-05/2:20 AM
"Roxanne! You don't have to put on the red light..." Your use of whom is pretentious and wrong. See usage note: http://dictionary.reference.com/search?q=who Some letters are missing after your apostrophes.
Re: a comment on To The Modern Black Standard by ALChemy	ALChemy 24.74.101.159	8-Nov-05/1:36 AM
Wow! What a comeback. What's next "I know you are but what am I"? Oh, You are a dick. Try denying that one Richard. <:o
Re: a comment on To The Modern Black Standard by ALChemy	ALChemy 24.74.101.159	8-Nov-05/1:29 AM
What is ironic is you think it's racist when the poem is actually about perpetuating racism. In this way I really mean it. The first word is "Rid" as in get rid of all these stereotypes. To use words like "Nigger" as only a kick against censorship is not good poetry it's just being a Richard. Dick.
Re: a comment on To The Modern Black Standard by ALChemy	ALChemy 24.74.101.159	8-Nov-05/1:18 AM
Saying "black self-image" is racist. Black standard is the popular image they generate. When black people stop calling each other Pimp, Nigga, Ho, etc. and stop refering to white folks as the man, when rappers stop rapping about how great it is to be a Gangsta, Pimp, Dealer, Criminal, etc. Then we'll talk. I never denied being racist at some level. We all are.
Re: a comment on the band by celticskatermatt1	ALChemy 24.74.101.159	8-Nov-05/1:01 AM
Why did I call you a teenager? The average grown-up gives up on such pipe dreams as rock stardom and instead focuses on sounding smarter by learning multisyllable words and talking down to teenagers. We envy your innocence but alas at 17 it won't be long before you join the throng of us fuddy-duddies. But really kid, you don't learn to skate by throwing yourself down the halfpipe and not expect to get hurt and ridiculed a little. Get yourself a collection of great poetry book or two and read it and study poetic methods (I mean without looking it up. What's an onomatopoeia or alliteration? You use a lot of one and in this poem maybe should use some of the other.) You'd be surprised how much of poetry is just a calculated trick. Does this sound better to you? In the music studio in my mind, the window vibes to every beat every rhyme and reason strung by bass strumming, humming, buzzing in my teeth lead guitar sings and wails and sails I kiss the mic. A taste of metal and cocaine Pyrotechnics blaze, my lungs bellow hordes of chords into the sky and from the crowd a thunder cloud for the band, their hands give praise We are gods of the stage till I awake to the quiet rage of reality. Just tricks of poetry. Rhyme, Metaphor, Symbolism, alliteration, etc. Bye the way some of your poems are pretty good. I just wish you knew why.
Re: a comment on the band by celticskatermatt1	richa 81.178.246.176	8-Nov-05/12:09 AM
Above anything else what tells the reader that you are about 13 is the appalling spelling. This is nothing to do with the reader and I would have thought a simple spellcheck is within anyone's 'intellect'.
Re: To The Modern Black Standard by ALChemy	richa 81.178.246.176	8-Nov-05/12:05 AM
I find it interesting that when people use the written word to say bad things about black people they call it irony if they don't really mean it. I would have thought using socially unacceptable words and thoughts gives the writer a kick, a reactance against censorship. That is not really irony.
Re: a comment on To The Modern Black Standard by ALChemy	richa 81.178.246.176	8-Nov-05/12:01 AM
do you think black people intrinsically have a black self-image involving slavery and pimping. Now that is racist.
Re: a comment on To The Modern Black Standard by ALChemy	richa 81.178.246.176	7-Nov-05/11:58 PM
Oh, you are a rambling idiot. <:(
Re: A Kiss Beneath The Blossom Tree by Caducus	Bhaskaryya 202.63.190.227	7-Nov-05/9:19 PM
Beautiful!