Re: a comment on the band by celticskatermatt1	celticskatermatt1 68.8.219.40	7-Nov-05/8:49 PM
Actually I am 17, Im sorry If a person with a higher intelect, as yourself, can not accept a poem that tells a story, that you < a reader> does not understand or knows about. bye the way your poems are pretty good, and im not trying to be negative about the whole thing. i just dont know why you asked if u was 13?
Re: a casting is rescued by ay deee	ALChemy 24.74.101.159	7-Nov-05/8:34 PM
Here it's poetry, at the steel mill it's a safety instruction manual. Not that bad though. Sounds like a circa 1930s setting.
Re: a comment on To The Modern Black Standard by ALChemy	ALChemy 24.74.101.159	7-Nov-05/7:25 PM
My poem includes words such as pimp, bitches, cocaine and motherfucker. If this is what reminds you of 5 year olds then I would suggest you get some serious psychiatric help. If you're replying to the comment I made on your poem. I would suggest you click the little green reply link in the corner of my comment beneath your poem. Post whatever remark your teenage mind can muster but for God sakes stop stalking everyone who says something you don't like. Ya sicko.
Re: the band by celticskatermatt1	Dovina 69.175.32.104	7-Nov-05/6:25 PM
I'd rather play my own tune, make it ryhm, tap its rythm, than to settle for the band. That would be real.
Re: To The Modern Black Standard by ALChemy	celticskatermatt1 68.8.219.40	7-Nov-05/6:18 PM
what are you like 5?
Re: the band by celticskatermatt1	ALChemy 24.74.101.159	7-Nov-05/6:10 PM
What are you, like 13?
Re: a comment on Bluegrass Blueshield by T. Jonathron Remp	ALChemy 24.74.101.159	7-Nov-05/3:28 PM
I think it's when you use K-Y jelly and you forget to wash it off and it dries and hardens.
Re: a comment on Sonata for Robin and Poet by Dovina	Dovina 69.175.32.104	7-Nov-05/3:27 PM
Okay, if you'll fight the system and give a comment, here's your shin-kick: Truckers should get double-taxed because without them bridges could be half as strong.
Re: a comment on To The Modern Black Standard by ALChemy	ALChemy 24.74.101.159	7-Nov-05/3:24 PM
Don't worry. Your first reaction is expected and somewhat intended. It only means you're normal. Irony can do that in a poem. It is kinda racist for a white dude (me) to criticize black people for their self image. So you're not waaaaaay off.
Re: Sonata for Robin and Poet by Dovina	INTRANSIT 69.33.159.194	7-Nov-05/3:21 PM
Where's my kick on credit?
Re: Bluegrass Blueshield by T. Jonathron Remp	INTRANSIT 69.33.159.194	7-Nov-05/3:20 PM
What's the Johnson-wax effect, then?
Re: To The Modern Black Standard by ALChemy	INTRANSIT 69.33.159.194	7-Nov-05/3:13 PM
wow. I'm waaaaaay off. I thought it was a litany against blacks! HA! I gotta get out more.
Re: a comment on To The Modern Black Standard by ALChemy	INTRANSIT 69.33.159.194	7-Nov-05/3:11 PM
You're a Black Irishman? Do you hate yourself?
Re: a comment on To The Modern Black Standard by ALChemy	ALChemy 24.74.101.159	7-Nov-05/2:59 PM
Oh, you are upset because I gave your poem "politics" a goose-egg. I just thought you sucked and LL Cool J did it better. :(
Re: a comment on Sonata for Robin and Poet by Dovina	Dovina 69.175.32.104	7-Nov-05/2:53 PM
Thank you.
Re: a comment on Sonata for Robin and Poet by Dovina	ALChemy 24.74.101.159	7-Nov-05/2:51 PM
That's 'cause I eat mostly corn. But really I think it's quite beautiful and funny. If you promise not to tell...-10-
Re: To The Modern Black Standard by ALChemy	richa 81.178.246.176	7-Nov-05/2:44 PM
Oh, you are upset because I deleted a comment. I just thought you were a rambling idiot. :(
Re: a comment on Sonata for Robin and Poet by Dovina	Dovina 69.175.32.104	7-Nov-05/2:08 PM
"That's what us robins do." lol. It's the only poem I posted this week, which makes it the best. lol. And I don't find much poop in what you're saying.
Re: When Did You Walk Away? by TLRufener	Dovina 69.175.32.104	7-Nov-05/2:05 PM
The question always has to be asked, when exactly did a separatiion of friends really happen? It's not when one of them walks away, but sometime before, maybe a long time before the other even suspected it. "When did you walk away?" is a good question.
Re: a comment on Sonata for Robin and Poet by Dovina	ALChemy 24.74.101.159	7-Nov-05/2:04 PM
"The most logical interpretation is not always right". No it's just logical. Forgive me if you feel I pooped on your poem but that's what us robins do. I actually think it's some of the best stuff you've written this week.