Re: a comment on Sonata for Robin and Poet by Dovina	Dovina 69.175.32.104	7-Nov-05/1:50 PM
The most logical interpretation is not always right, that's what I always say, and go on looking, to the frustration of nits and nit-pickers. Maybe the robin also ate some berries.
Re: Sonata for Robin and Poet by Dovina	ALChemy 24.74.101.159	7-Nov-05/1:30 PM
An amusing little story. RED and brown? Does the bird have colon cancer?
Re: a casting is rescued by ay deee	Dovina 69.175.32.104	7-Nov-05/12:45 PM
Would be stronger with a few words scratched - carbonless, "is" in the title, becoming, invincibility.
Re: Bluegrass Blueshield by T. Jonathron Remp	ALChemy 24.74.101.159	7-Nov-05/11:32 AM
Not cinquain. You know what's funny. If you search cinquain at dictionary.com it causes a glitch in which it can't find any definitions but then offers twice the exact same spelling as an alternative and if you click those it just brings up the same response but if you type cinquains (the plural form) than you get the definition for cinquain. Maybe it's the Smythe-Klein Effect.
Re: a comment on Steak and Satin by Dovina	Dovina 209.247.222.89	7-Nov-05/7:16 AM
The hideous and groundless thing here is your insistance on dwelling in a side issue of no importance. What will happen when you wake up and realize?
Re: a comment on Posted Pelicans by Dovina	Dovina 209.247.222.89	7-Nov-05/7:13 AM
You say that because you are looking at one small side issue of the arguement, ignoring 90% of what I said.
Re: Night on the Towne by Modulo	cyan9 217.40.63.105	7-Nov-05/6:10 AM
Much better than your piece High? Coo. Uses plenty of lively language that reminds me of dodgy cocktail bars. I'm not sure about the exclamation mark and the capitalization of jazz nights at the end, bit too much exclamation for my likings, anyway good effort.
Re: When Did You Walk Away? by TLRufener	zodiac 217.144.7.195	7-Nov-05/5:20 AM
I know you use your poetry to convey your thoughts and experiences and wish to make an accurate account of your life and times and everything, but did you know that in 61 poems you've asked an astonishing 83 questions? Do you plan on ever answering anything?
Re: The Fonz Koan by zen_tom	zodiac 217.144.7.195	7-Nov-05/4:52 AM
Not haiku.
Re: a comment on Posted Pelicans by Dovina	zodiac 217.144.7.195	7-Nov-05/4:37 AM
DOVINA: The black race is the most different from the white race. ZODIAC: No, we're still fighting. DOVINA: Whatever, I know I'm not racist, while you think you might be racist. By my logic, you're racist and I'm not. ZODIAC: I can't load 'Racism' so let me ask you here: Do you understand how given ANY TWO GROUPS AT ALL, one of them HAS to be superior, on average, to the other, on average, at any given thing? -=Dark_Angel=-'s right, if you don't get that, you're racist. DOVINA: If I'm racist, I'm only racist IN FAVOR of cute blacks. ZODIAC: That is not a plausible defence. DOVINA: Blaaaaaaaaat. ZODIAC: Whatever.
Re: a comment on Steak and Satin by Dovina	zodiac 217.144.7.195	7-Nov-05/4:27 AM
If you really had integrity, you'd do it. As things stand you've Hitler's integrity, clinging to the death to some groundless, hideous, arbitrary notion. When you wake up and find what a bunker your ideology's reduced to, you're going to shoot yourself and everyone else in the room.
Re: a comment on Racism by Dovina	ALChemy 24.74.101.159	7-Nov-05/1:35 AM
Then you'll just love this: http://www.lyricskeeper.com/david_alan_coe-lyrics/124442-nigger_fucker-lyrics.htm
Re: a comment on Scarlet by BrandonW	ALChemy 24.74.101.159	7-Nov-05/1:25 AM
You're not a Catholic priest are you?
Re: a comment on Scarlet by BrandonW	BrandonW 216.78.98.9	6-Nov-05/8:35 PM
Its been my experiEnce that awkward little redhead boys are great lays too! FYI
Re: a comment on ~PROM MEANS 2 ME~ by T. Jonathron Remp	T. Jonathron Remp 69.151.10.36	6-Nov-05/6:53 PM
Thanks for the tip!
Re: a comment on Racism by Dovina	Dovina 209.247.222.96	6-Nov-05/5:58 PM
Yes, you are right. How could I have been so deceptive as to cover my lack of integrity in veneer. Actually, I must admit prejudice toward Negroes. (And please notice my bending to the name you have chosen for their race, It’s a good name, but has come into disrepute in recent years.) My prejudice is in liking some of them a lot, and basing my affection partially on race. The cute black man at Trader Joe’s who gives me free samples is absolutely adorable in his curls and baby-like smile. And that bass singer doing Old Man River is so very manly and domineering. Then there’s the poet with enough smarts to make me feel inferior sometimes, which has led to my being genuinely attracted. Yes, I must stop tiptoeing and get right to the heart of my prejudices in the future.
Re: a comment on Posted Pelicans by Dovina	Dovina 209.247.222.91	6-Nov-05/5:09 PM
Does this mean we're not fighting anymore?
Re: a comment on Posted Pelicans by Dovina	Dovina 209.247.222.91	6-Nov-05/5:08 PM
Yeah, maybe some lines like: Beak inserted under bushy wing.
Re: Fading Memory by longships	Dovina 209.247.222.91	6-Nov-05/5:05 PM
A somber tale, and if true, points to the death rate by car accident, 4%, compared to suicide, 1.4%, in the US. It's just that poetry seldom leads to car accidents.
Re: a comment on Racism by Dovina	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 81.151.150.39	6-Nov-05/4:20 PM
If your veneer of racial impartiality was anything other than skin deep, you'd have no trouble answering the question. But you can't answer it, because you can't even think the word 'Negro' without tiptoeing around the subject, terrified of exposing the slightest hint of prejudice. The only thing more astounding than your closet racism is your complete lack of integrity. -0-