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Forgive Me (Free verse) by TLRufener Tell me why I am here.
I sit alone;
Before you,
I am at your mercy,
I ask for your help;
I am in need of your guidance.
I am a child of your grace,
And I have done wrong.
I ask in all of what you have given me;
Forgive me for what I have done.
Up the ladder:
You can never go back!
Down the ladder:
my girl's day [tri-ku]
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Posted: November 8, 2005 3:56 PM PST; Last modified: November 8, 2005 3:56 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.119203 Overall Rank: 5881 Comments:
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cyan9 @ 217.40.63.105
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9-Nov-05/5:56 AM
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Shows the humility and neediness of a prayer for assistance with simplicity and accuracy.
You are here because someone told you you need to ask forgiveness for practically everything you do. Now that you have an answer, I hope you'll consider getting off your knees and going outside.
Answer:
"Some day, and that day may never come, I will call upon you to do a service for me..." 160 view(s)
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