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My life (Free verse) by half.italian
I am a dreamer
a weaver of thoughts
My mind paints a picture
and in it I'm caught
I've seen dragons and magic
and money and love,
I've swum like a fish
and flown high above
They catch me with irons
and hold my head down,
It's hard to break free
from this solid gold crown
If you see me one day
a blank look on my face
I'm probably a runner
who's winning his race.
Wake me up please
I'd think you were kind
I feel like a prisoner
trapped in my mind.
I'm tired of dreaming
my mind has gone numb
I'm afraid when I wake
I'll just be a bum.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.0
Weighted score: 5.119203
Overall Rank: 5917
Posted: August 19, 2007 6:18 PM PDT; Last modified: August 19, 2007 6:18 PM PDT
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