Re: a comment on My kids by amanda_dcosta	amanda_dcosta 202.83.45.117	19-Dec-05/12:24 AM
This one is true - very true- my daily activity and life with my kids, Joshua (5) and Ruth(3). It was written few days ago when i asked my husband for a theme or an opening line, and he challenged me with the topic - 'our children', or 'My husband'. well, it was more of a joke than a challenge, but i got thinking and this was written within 15 - 20 minutes. i'm glad i wrote it, it was fun putting it all together. thank you for appreciating it. And zodiac can't ever say that your life is dull, not from how i see it. he gives you enough pep to go on on poemranker. Cheer up.
Re: Blah Blah by Blindpoetry	sliver 172.199.242.198	19-Dec-05/12:22 AM
Your originality is refreshing in this world of mediocrity.
Re: Privacy by Dovina	sliver 172.199.242.198	19-Dec-05/12:20 AM
In the beginning it somehow reminded me of Alice's Restaurant.
Re: I love to see the sunrise by amanda_dcosta	sliver 172.199.242.198	19-Dec-05/12:17 AM
How do you have time to see the sunrise between waking your children? I see that you draw inspiration from your life, I'm glad to see that your life is inspirational.
Re: Lost Identity by TLRufener	sliver 172.199.242.198	19-Dec-05/12:14 AM
Wow!! Well done.
Re: Returning Home by Niphredil	sliver 172.199.242.198	19-Dec-05/12:13 AM
I often feel the same way, but not so eloquently.
Re: to move foward by ay deee	sliver 172.199.242.198	19-Dec-05/12:12 AM
At least there's that.
Re: Do Something by Miggy	sliver 172.199.242.198	19-Dec-05/12:10 AM
A fine dream, but not within our nature I fear.
Re: My kids by amanda_dcosta	sliver 172.199.242.198	19-Dec-05/12:08 AM
It didn't seem to smooth out until about a third of the way through, maybe it's just me.
Re: To Michelle by ALChemy	sliver 172.199.242.198	19-Dec-05/12:04 AM
This smacks of Poe, beautifully done, time well spent. May she rest in peace.
Re: Mixed Quartet by Dovina	sliver 172.199.242.198	19-Dec-05/12:01 AM
A carol for the masses eh?
Re: Bri's Room (not done) by Sunshine Conkey	sliver 172.199.242.198	18-Dec-05/11:48 PM
There is still room for improvement, as with everything.
Re: a comment on To Michelle by ALChemy	Dovina 209.247.222.99	18-Dec-05/7:07 PM
I believe you most of the time, really. And I feel no hatchet burnings in my skull, not from you anyway.
Re: a comment on To Michelle by ALChemy	ALChemy 24.74.101.159	18-Dec-05/6:58 PM
Nice I'm rubber you're glue remark. Words of wisdom: Most burried hatchets end up burried in skulls. You want honesty? The truth is almost every day is Christmas for me. That's what I thought. You wouldn't believe me even if I'd told the truth. It's the story of my life. Merry Christmas Dovina. You're one of my favorite rankers on this site, honest.
Re: a comment on To Michelle by ALChemy	Dovina 209.247.222.99	18-Dec-05/6:51 PM
It's retaliation for the abuse we take for gushing our own.
Re: Mixed Quartet by Dovina	ALChemy 24.74.101.159	18-Dec-05/6:46 PM
A -10- for inventing your adverbs.
Re: a comment on Privacy by Dovina	ALChemy 24.74.101.159	18-Dec-05/6:40 PM
You under estimate the power of gay perverts to corrupt a poem.
Re: a comment on To Michelle by ALChemy	ALChemy 24.74.101.159	18-Dec-05/6:34 PM
So jaded is the effect on longtime poemrankers that they think of others love notions as but a joke.
Re: My kids by amanda_dcosta	Dovina 209.247.222.99	18-Dec-05/6:21 PM
I like to think this is all true. I don't know why, but I want to think that at least one poemranker writes herself as she really is. Please tell me it's true. This is a great life you have. Please keep writing about it just as it is. And agaain, please thell me it's true. And please ignore zodiac when he tells you, as he surely will, that I'm saying this because my life is dull.
Re: a comment on To Michelle by ALChemy	Dovina 209.247.222.99	18-Dec-05/6:13 PM
That's exactly right. All my attempts at writing my love notions turn out like kiddieposter mush. (except to the man they're written to). Tell me your love notions, however, and I'll make them into laughable 10-votable literature.