Re: February by half.italian	half.italian 75.82.193.144	1-Feb-10/10:03 PM
Thanks for responding. :) ok...It was just a simple point in time type thing, but I see where you are going. What type of payoff do you generally look for in a poem? I guess I was only trying to convey a feeling. Nothing more. I see that it could seem "incomplete" for some people. I'll see if I can expand on it. Have you submitted anything recently? This site needs some tlc from poem makers.
Re: February by half.italian	Dovina 68.183.149.64	1-Feb-10/4:35 PM
why not when it was cold? is love when you want it or is it good all the time?
Re: a comment on Farewell, Kind Lover by Dovina	Dovina 68.183.149.64	1-Feb-10/4:33 PM
Sure I can. You depart asa thunderstorm having acracked and aboomed over a head and under a ground acarried off by cool breath of a God You waken seeds tender, brave sprouts feeling the sky for a twist of a updraft overshadow of acloud happy to ablige
Re: a bit of theory by pete	half.italian 75.82.193.144	24-Jan-10/9:03 PM
Léon Theremin
Re: certain things... by nypoet22	half.italian 75.82.193.144	24-Jan-10/9:01 PM
No doubt.
Re: End of day poem by ecargo	half.italian 75.82.193.144	24-Jan-10/8:59 PM
pewter sky :)
Re: My Thoughts by amanda_dcosta	half.italian 75.82.193.144	24-Jan-10/8:55 PM
Do you choose to breath?
Re: Farewell, Kind Lover by Dovina	half.italian 75.82.193.144	24-Jan-10/8:53 PM
Can you please fix this a bit for me. Just add some "a"s. I love it.
Re: With Old Light by Ranger	half.italian 75.82.193.144	24-Jan-10/8:51 PM
Not bad for a brit.
Re: untitle by daggatolar	half.italian 75.82.193.144	22-Jan-10/11:45 PM
and hot me?
Re: Withering Blithering Blathering Wavering by T. Jonathron Remp	half.italian 75.82.193.144	22-Jan-10/11:41 PM
I liked the first few lines because I could keep the beat. That must have been all you had going, because once I lost the beat, I hated it.
Re: Reunification, the Pong by http://mulberryfairy	half.italian 75.82.193.144	22-Jan-10/11:37 PM
Nice imagery....but forced. It doesn't feel natural.
Re: hi by pete	half.italian 75.82.193.144	22-Jan-10/11:35 PM
pete, you need some more LSD. Keep those brain juices flowing.
Re: Mother Mayday is Here to Stay (Stay Away!) by T. Jonathron Remp	half.italian 75.82.193.144	22-Jan-10/11:32 PM
not poetry. Somewhat intelligent angst.
Re: hi by pete	T. Jonathron Remp 97.64.176.2	6-Jan-10/3:36 PM
Winner
Re: Billy Collins by INTRANSIT	http://mulberryfairy 207.5.157.235	7-Dec-09/3:46 PM
Wasn't Billy Collins the movie with the English dancing boy? Nice poem.
Re: Warlord by INTRANSIT	http://mulberryfairy 207.5.157.235	7-Dec-09/3:45 PM
I love "drank till my nerves were /wired like an afro". Well done.
Re: welcome home by ThePariahDog	http://mulberryfairy 207.5.157.235	7-Dec-09/3:40 PM
nice play there, it feels like you are going to be angry at the beginning of the second stanza, but then your narrator has surrendered.
Re: untitle by daggatolar	http://mulberryfairy 207.5.157.235	7-Dec-09/3:38 PM
I don't get the first verse at all. Second is nice.
Re: Withering Blithering Blathering Wavering by T. Jonathron Remp	http://mulberryfairy 207.5.157.235	7-Dec-09/3:32 PM
"Menstrual Mongoose"! Hooray!