Re: Bloody Stools 'n' Butterflies by EAger to Offend	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.13.138	21-Jun-06/3:41 AM
Celestial signs in the shitter...... yes, indeed I've had a few of those. A charming little ode.
Re: Dashboard Jesus by wilco	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.13.138	21-Jun-06/3:02 AM
A bit too location-specific for my taste. As a matter of interest why are so many Americans local town-specific, mentioning little towns no one else has heard of? Would you no be confused if I wrote a poem all about Tenterden or Woolwich Arsenal or Beckenham Junction? Surely it detracts from universality?
Re: Jesus Rises from the Grove by wilco	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.13.138	21-Jun-06/2:58 AM
I rather liked this and would have liked it more with a capital C for Cuban.
Re: a comment on Jesus, you I see by amanda_dcosta	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.13.138	21-Jun-06/2:57 AM
I entirely agree. I nearly always log in to deliver a zero (excpt when I give myself one).
Re: Jesus, you I see by amanda_dcosta	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.13.138	21-Jun-06/2:56 AM
Very amusing little ditty. Unrealistic though.
Re: To Brittany by amanda_dcosta	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.13.138	21-Jun-06/2:55 AM
What has this got to do with Brittany - or indeed any other region of France?
Re: Blessings by amanda_dcosta	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.13.138	21-Jun-06/2:53 AM
Worthy of William McGonagall.
Re: Fall of the goblet darlings by Caducus	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.13.138	21-Jun-06/2:50 AM
Odd (as usual) but a fine selection of words. I prefer the English spelling of "foetal" to the somewhat anodyne US version ("fetal"). I shall give 7/10, marginally higher than your recent anonymous rating of one of my nastier pieces. Edna
Re: a comment on The Third Fall Of Jesus by amanda_dcosta	amanda_dcosta 202.164.137.248	21-Jun-06/1:11 AM
Edna, thankyou for your precious time. I'm honoured. And the vote too. Whether it's funny/ a joke /or serious, I see that you've already voted. So, it makes no difference to explain myself. And if you want to plagiarise it all you want, then go ahead. Feel free. Give vent to all your frustration and pent up emotions and anger. Feel free. That's why my poems are here for you as long as you take the time to read it. That's all that matters... that my stuff be read. What you do with it is your problem, not mine. And P.S. I ain't scared of your crap, and it ain't contagious to me or doesn't affect me one bit. So as long as you understand that, I'll be looking out for you to read and comment my poems. It means a lot to me that you'd take the time. So, till then, nice knowing you!
Re: Amputee by INTRANSIT	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.60.128	20-Jun-06/4:04 PM
Wonderful.
Re: The Third Fall Of Jesus by amanda_dcosta	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.60.128	20-Jun-06/4:04 PM
This is one of the funniest poems I have ever read. This verse had me in stitches.... "Next morning, I, the road did cross Surprisingly I had a toss A passing bike had brushed me past Into confusion was I cast." I am deeply tempted to plagiarise it, it is so dreadful. It's hard to decide what score: 10/10 for garbage; 0/10 for poetry. Since i think you didn't really know how bad it was I'll go for the latter. If you assure me you meant it as a joke, I'll go for 10/10.
Re: a comment on A Sexy Crucifixion Poem by Edna Sweetlove	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.60.128	20-Jun-06/3:58 PM
Dear ALC: I hope wou'll revise your 5/10 mark now we are on friendly terms again! I think you must agree this is a gem.
Re: a comment on Let's praise great Britannia's golden days of now and then by Edna Sweetlove	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.60.128	20-Jun-06/3:56 PM
I appreciate that 10/10. Perhaps you have good taste after all. Suggest you check out the loonies in the "worst poems" section.....
Re: a comment on slice of moonlight by lmp	amanda_dcosta 202.164.137.248	20-Jun-06/9:48 AM
You bet! From what I read, you have one. Any more kids?
Re: a comment on slice of moonlight by lmp	lmp 141.154.134.3	20-Jun-06/8:19 AM
<smile> thanks, it was written straight from my own. nothing like parenthood...
Re: a comment on slice of moonlight by lmp	lmp 141.154.134.3	20-Jun-06/8:18 AM
thanks. glad you enjoyed. now go write one! :)
Re: Let's praise great Britannia's golden days of now and then by Edna Sweetlove	ALChemy 71.75.188.128	20-Jun-06/5:37 AM
Did this all come out of the Redcoat comment? It was all in good fun ya'know.
Re: a comment on Blessings by amanda_dcosta	ALChemy 71.75.188.128	20-Jun-06/5:22 AM
No, I got it the first time. I only hope you don't interpret the sarcasm I used on Edna Sweetlove in one of her poems as anti-English. To think I'm always warning everyone else about written sarcasm and there I went doing it.
Re: a comment on Blessings by amanda_dcosta	ALChemy 71.75.188.128	20-Jun-06/5:16 AM
If only our atheist friends were here. Right now it's like a soccer match with only one team playing. It is funny how "facts" can be interpreted in so many different ways. makes it hard to argue that they were facts in the first place. How'd the exams go?
Re: a comment on Blessings by amanda_dcosta	amanda_dcosta 202.164.137.248	20-Jun-06/4:26 AM
Thank you.... I take this as a compliment. Hmmmm.... Let's see what I can cook up.