Re: a comment on The Pit’s Bottom by Dovina	Dovina 12.72.34.132	29-Oct-06/6:40 AM
So stick around and you shall hear more, or less.
Re: The Pit’s Bottom by Dovina	ALChemy 71.75.187.195	29-Oct-06/6:38 AM
The Tao of Dovina.
Re: a comment on The world's shortest poem by ALChemy	Dovina 12.72.34.132	29-Oct-06/6:37 AM
How about "creatively spelled"?
Re: a comment on The world's shortest poem by ALChemy	ALChemy 71.75.187.195	29-Oct-06/6:23 AM
NEWSFLASH: Nobody uses "WRONGLY" at the end of a verb anymore except very old English people. ("WRONGLY spelled" would have been fine.)
Re: Rare Oul' Times in the County Wicklow by Edna Sweetlove	ALChemy 71.75.187.195	29-Oct-06/6:01 AM
Actually it's England that's on the wrong side of the street. We had cars first. Anything to prove your not our 51st state.
Re: a comment on The world's shortest poem by ALChemy	ALChemy 71.75.187.195	29-Oct-06/5:48 AM
...which is the entire point of the poem genius.
Re: a comment on Vote Goats by ALChemy	ALChemy 71.75.187.195	29-Oct-06/5:46 AM
Fair enough but I could have sworn you were one of those anonymous voting types not so long ago.
Re: Jesus in a leisure suit by Imago	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.200.161	29-Oct-06/4:43 AM
This shows promise especially the references to the horrible car you drive. What a pity it is wrecked by these hideous lines... "to where I wanna be But my mind is floating off the berm" Why use a non-word like "wanna"? And what does a raised river bank have to do with it?
Re: Fascists by Imago	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.200.161	29-Oct-06/4:40 AM
Trite. You probably don't even know what a fascist is. I shall be generous for a change: 1/10
Re: a comment on One goal,Gotten&Changed by Hostileintent	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.200.161	29-Oct-06/4:38 AM
Oh yes and the word "gotten" is cringeworthy too!
Re: One goal,Gotten&Changed by Hostileintent	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.200.161	29-Oct-06/4:37 AM
Embarrassingly badly written. The first stanza is doggerel. The use of "man" in the last line is appalling. I think you have found your true vocation in the armed forces. A gun will lie better in your hands than a pen. Happy shooting and killing!
Re: Vote Goats by ALChemy	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.200.161	29-Oct-06/4:34 AM
Well, this poem is very badly written. It also contains poor grammar and syntax. And the primordial slime bit is a bit over the top. I am tempted to give it 0/10 just out of bitchiness but that would be unfair as it holds a kernel of truth in its clumsiness. So 5/10. You can't say fairer than that now can you, Al, dearie?
Re: The world's shortest poem by ALChemy	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.200.161	29-Oct-06/4:32 AM
Not short enough. It is wonderful to find someone who writes a two word poem AND ONE OF THEM IS SPELLED WRONGLY! An unbeatable achievment.
Re: a comment on Blue, Black & White by oneglove	oneglove 24.216.70.145	28-Oct-06/10:09 AM
this is true, maybe one of these days i'll get around to learning how to play the guitar sitting in the corener of my room and it will truly be a lyric
Re: Kill Criminals In The Name Of JESUS! by Sing4Jesus!	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.250.132	27-Oct-06/4:32 PM
Utterly terrible. Total defecation. 10/10 for a good laugh!
Re: The Pit’s Bottom by Dovina	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.250.132	27-Oct-06/4:31 PM
A combination of pretentiousness and ignorance. Boring too! I'll be generous and score it 4/10, no silly me 2/10.
Re: Dancing on Glass by thepinkbunnyofdoom	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.250.132	27-Oct-06/4:29 PM
A bit of punctuation would have done no harm. But it's OK I suppose. Noy exactly profound that last line, is it?
Re: Blue, Black & White by oneglove	Dovina 12.72.35.2	27-Oct-06/2:31 PM
Reads like a song. Call it a lyric and give it a tune.
Re: Consider this by MacFrantic	Dovina 12.72.35.2	27-Oct-06/2:26 PM
Don’t “think twice about God or the Devil. We are fragments in a sea of ineffable words.” I feel that way often. Sometimes I think it’s impossible to talk about God or the Devil without resorting to analogy or metaphor. Some say that if anthropomorphic language is all we have in these matters it becomes added evidence for their non-existence. I disagree but see their point. Some good thoughts here, but could be more poetic, and at least called “prose poem.”
Re: a comment on The Pit’s Bottom by Dovina	Dovina 12.72.35.2	27-Oct-06/2:14 PM
Oh, I don’t know. Say, for example, that a theologian’s work is to prove the existence of God, not banter about with unbelievers.