Re: a comment on The Pit’s Bottom by Dovina	Dovina 12.72.35.2	27-Oct-06/2:13 PM
Well, Mr. Everlasting Godstopper, that’s a hoot of a name. What I am trying to convey in the part before “But:” is what a lot of theology tries to convey: a wonderful, loving God, an evil sinful world, and a means of reconciling the two. But it always fails when they find cancer cells among God’s creations. The second part says to forget all that and simply accept the universe as is—the atheist message. I call it The Pit’s Bottom because until a theist like me accepts the creation at its worst and attributes the bottom of the pit to God, she’s done for.
Re: a comment on The Pit’s Bottom by Dovina	Ranger 62.252.32.15	27-Oct-06/10:10 AM
Ha! Everlasting Godstopper, that's brilliant -10- Jesus was a lesbian?
Re: a comment on The Pit’s Bottom by Dovina	drnick 24.176.22.254	27-Oct-06/9:00 AM
You forgot my other names: the anti-christ, enlightened one, Dr. God, The Everlasting Godstopper, and super lesbian dead-fetus Jesus.
Re: The Pit’s Bottom by Dovina	drnick 24.176.22.254	27-Oct-06/8:52 AM
I'm not sure I deserved a response such as this, but thank you. This is very good, however im not completely sure of the over-all message you're trying to convey here. And evil is not a mystery, evil is me. I am evil, I am the DEVIL (woogy-boogy).
Re: a comment on The Pit’s Bottom by Dovina	Ranger 62.252.32.15	27-Oct-06/4:35 AM
Well what can I say?
Re: Consider this by MacFrantic	Ranger 62.252.32.15	27-Oct-06/4:33 AM
Now choose...the red pill - or the blue pill...
Re: The Pit’s Bottom by Dovina	Dovina 12.72.36.126	26-Oct-06/1:02 PM
This piece of doggerel is in response to “Crappy” by Dr. Nick, DND, Doctor of Non-Divinity, Pastor of the Michigan Church of Atheism.
Re: Royal Blades by Dovina	Zoe 89.241.144.3	26-Oct-06/11:13 AM
Muscular writing! Not sure about the last line. There's a whole other story there.
Re: Kill Criminals In The Name Of JESUS! by Sing4Jesus!	Engelbert Humpalot 194.154.22.35	26-Oct-06/9:59 AM
The last stanza gives me hope for mankind.
Re: Flea poem by Sing4Jesus!	Engelbert Humpalot 194.154.22.35	26-Oct-06/9:58 AM
Magnificent!
Re: Edna's Video Library by Edna Sweetlove	Engelbert Humpalot 194.154.22.35	26-Oct-06/9:57 AM
This is a very piece of work. I congratulate you. 10/10!!!
Re: # 2 by Lifeboatman	Ranger 62.252.32.15	26-Oct-06/1:24 AM
This is good in places and not-so-good in others. 'Me, you and Solitude...' is good. 'There never was a king who us did rule; society had branded us fools' is not so good. Have a comb through the grammar, and reverse about 75% of the word order inversions. That's what I'd do, anyway.
Re: # 2 by Lifeboatman	Dovina 12.72.34.18	24-Oct-06/6:09 PM
I don’t pretened to follow this; I suspect that you and your lover are the only ones who do. I do like some of the lines: “Must we to Time's fall fall?” “Yet go gently, never in haste. Deny not what you desire to taste. Then shall glee befall us.” “daffodils” “bouquets”
Re: a comment on Prologue by Dovina	Dovina 70.38.78.229	24-Oct-06/11:11 AM
It is intro to my next great work. Stay tuned.
Re: a comment on Your Eyes by Dovina	Dovina 70.38.78.229	24-Oct-06/11:03 AM
Actually, “gate” may not be what I’m searching for. It’s more subtle than that; maybe just a fencing nail left loose at a cedar post, allowing a strand of barbed wire to be lowered enough to gain entrance. Thanks for the comment.
Re: a comment on The Unforgiven II by alvinb	nentwined 68.232.253.122	24-Oct-06/9:30 AM
When the hell did my "mark this poem as plagiarised" button break? Meh.
Re: The Unforgiven II by alvinb	JAM 74.135.123.249	24-Oct-06/9:11 AM
this act of plagiarism has been reported to moderator
Re: Crappy by drnick	howl 81.178.72.28	24-Oct-06/8:38 AM
you seem to keep missing the verb to be out all the time. If you see the verb to be as naughty use different verbs.
Re: Your Eyes by Dovina	howl 81.178.72.28	24-Oct-06/8:34 AM
Good apart from the last line which is a bit of a bum ending.
Re: MRS Degree by Miggy	howl 81.178.72.28	24-Oct-06/8:31 AM
She is the opposit of a tack is terrible :( as is the teachers giving her an A. I'd have given her an F.