Re: Still by half.italian	howl 81.178.72.28	1-Nov-06/3:19 AM
Too disparate see daniella's txt to Russia. The 'I am' in the first line is used to draw together the images.
Re: 311006 txt to russia by daniella	howl 81.178.72.28	1-Nov-06/2:52 AM
A little unsubstantial. It has a well crafted order.
Re: a comment on The Perigenetic Prayer by ALChemy	Ranger 62.252.32.15	1-Nov-06/2:25 AM
You see, I wouldn't mind that much even if you were anti-English, as I'm pretty sure that you would have some sort of thought behind it. As opposed to Edna who seems to have absorbed all the political nous that comes from using The Sun as toilet paper. In any case, we're not exactly the most credible nation at the moment. And I don't see it changing in the near future :-(
Re: a comment on The Perigenetic Prayer by ALChemy	Ranger 62.252.32.15	1-Nov-06/2:20 AM
"It" is probably accurate enough.
Re: a comment on "Twee" by Ranger	Ranger 62.252.32.15	1-Nov-06/1:39 AM
She can have my bollocks too. After all, the foundation of traditional marriage is 'what's mine is yours'.
Re: a comment on Rare Oul' Times in the County Wicklow by Edna Sweetlove	Ranger 62.252.32.15	1-Nov-06/1:35 AM
That's some nice editing! My grammar is lovely. When she was younger she could sing all twenty-three verses of 'Hooplah, Hooplah, Where's My Fucking Hooplah?' while making Sunday roast for an entire workhouse's population of orphans. Of course, in those days the rationing system didn't extend to orphans, miscreants, tramps or other undesirables so they had to roast an orphan every week. Occasionally they'd get lucky and a German pilot would come crashing down, screaming and burning in the wreckage. Those Germans are so full of chocolate and bratwurst they can feed an entire plantation's worth of GCSE-mentality controversial poets, can't they? With ketchup!!!!!!!11 LOL!!!!!!11111oneoneoneoneonehundredandone!!! She never got her Hooplah.
Re: a comment on Rare Oul' Times in the County Wicklow by Edna Sweetlove	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.221.110	31-Oct-06/4:31 PM
You may be intelligent, Al, you just hide it so well. We could have so much in common. Maybe not!
Re: a comment on Rare Oul' Times in the County Wicklow by Edna Sweetlove	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.221.110	31-Oct-06/4:30 PM
Yes, keep it to yourself. I like Italy. I like Italians. Half castes? That's a different bucket of ravioli.
Re: a comment on Rare Oul' Times in the County Wicklow by Edna Sweetlove	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.221.110	31-Oct-06/4:28 PM
Your grammar is not good. Have you heard of the subjunctive? What's wrong with O'Neill? Moron.
Re: August 23, 1944 - 102 miles west of Paris by Ranger	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.221.110	31-Oct-06/4:26 PM
An odd fullstop would do no one any harm, sweetie.
Re: "Twee" by Ranger	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.221.110	31-Oct-06/4:26 PM
Bollocks
Re: a comment on Still by half.italian	half.italian 66.77.102.10	31-Oct-06/11:20 AM
Tastes are 'correct' if they are in line with mine. :) Probably shouldnt have used correct back to back like that.
Re: Suburban Spleen by Sasha	Dovina 70.38.78.229	31-Oct-06/10:59 AM
Yes, a familiar sentiment. Spleen in the title is a correct usage, but an uncommon one; maybe another word. Welcome back.
Re: Jesus Around Your Neck (Final Version) by Wakeboarder20	Dovina 70.38.78.229	31-Oct-06/10:57 AM
Another criticism of Christian hypocricy, and fairly well stated. Ironically, one of Jesus' major complaints with the "church" of his day was hypocricy.
Re: Fare Price (Final Version) by Wakeboarder20	Dovina 70.38.78.229	31-Oct-06/10:54 AM
Fare price, as in a ticket to Heaven, is meant, I presume, as criticism of the church for wanting money for such passage. It's acommon theme, and not too well presented here. I'd rather see a juxteposition of "fare" and "fair."
Re: 311006 txt to russia by daniella	Dovina 70.38.78.229	31-Oct-06/10:50 AM
Yes, I have been spoken to by such voices. A less cryptic title might dispell criticism.
Re: Still by half.italian	Dovina 70.38.78.229	31-Oct-06/10:45 AM
I relate to scarce memories, ones that feel like they responded to fate. I don't believe in fate, but I know the feeling. I don't like the idea of "correct tastes." The Eiffel tower has an appealing shape, but it may not be a "correct taste" to everyone; if fact it is not.
Re: a comment on The Perigenetic Prayer by ALChemy	ALChemy 71.75.187.195	31-Oct-06/7:48 AM
Thing is I'm by no means anti-English. I'm anti anti-American English twit. A title of which Ol' Edna fits perfectly into.
Re: a comment on The Perigenetic Prayer by ALChemy	ALChemy 71.75.187.195	31-Oct-06/7:30 AM
You say it like Oliva' Twist, like you 'unger for it."Can I have some mo' Please?"- Bon apitit bitch.
Re: Still by half.italian	Ranger 62.252.32.15	31-Oct-06/6:40 AM
It's really scattered - more a collection of half-connected thoughts. I guess maybe that's what you're aiming at; if so they're a bit too independently crisp and sharp to be dreamy thoughts.