Re: a comment on Captured by Dovina	Dovina 208.127.90.176	16-Feb-07/9:49 AM
I can't imagine him as Paul Bunyan just because he swings a pick, handles a shovel, and pushes a wheelbarrow. And nothing is said about the size of his "member." Her finger is tiny compared to his. Maybe I do need to clarify, since several people are misinterpreting - some of course for their own reasons.
Re: a self-conscious lack of denial by nentwined	Dovina 208.127.90.176	16-Feb-07/9:39 AM
A couple of wines and all is fine.
Re: Plurals by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	Dovina 208.127.90.176	16-Feb-07/9:27 AM
The plural of “-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.” is “-=Darkies_Angel=-, Private In flagrante delicto.”
Re: Plurals by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199	16-Feb-07/8:05 AM
Along a similar theme: A bolus bearded wound of Rockmages A rampant herd of Dovinas A greasy slag of Bethys A splitarse of Katies
Re: a comment on a self-conscious lack of denial by nentwined	nentwined 76.167.62.172	15-Feb-07/9:39 PM
I only tried Southern Comfort once... it was too sickeningly sweet for me, then, and never had the urge to try it again.
Re: a self-conscious lack of denial by nentwined	half.italian 76.172.249.205	15-Feb-07/9:37 PM
Southern Comfort always brings me spirit wisdom.
Re: Friday's Monday's June by Enkidu	half.italian 76.172.249.205	15-Feb-07/9:28 PM
It's just fun to read.
Re: Complaints by jessicazee	half.italian 76.172.249.205	15-Feb-07/9:21 PM
I really like it. I see something clearly. Dad comes home from hard work, to a child who wants to play. He just can't handle children being children when he's tired. I could be off, but it works for me.
Re: Celui by half.italian	half.italian 76.172.249.205	15-Feb-07/9:08 PM
Thanks. I wish I had her back.
Re: a comment on sad moments by rbooey	nentwined 76.167.62.172	15-Feb-07/7:07 PM
Well said. :)
Re: sad moments by rbooey	nentwined 76.167.62.172	15-Feb-07/7:07 PM
There is no happiness.
Re: JUST A FEW by rbooey	nentwined 76.167.62.172	15-Feb-07/7:05 PM
If you actually mean any of this, know that it is a very poor tribute. Which is not to be ashamed of--probably most tributes are poor. But if you do actually mean any of it, consider trying to improve it--or just move on.
Re: JUST A FEW by rbooey	nentwined 76.167.62.172	15-Feb-07/7:05 PM
ouch.
Re: a comment on my hunger has become a hunger for revenge by nentwined	nentwined 76.167.62.172	15-Feb-07/6:57 PM
I'm open to some cleaning up, but I sure do like my semicolons and my appositives and my parentheticals. :)
Re: a comment on my hunger has become a hunger for revenge by nentwined	nentwined 76.167.62.172	15-Feb-07/6:56 PM
It was supposed to be bad. But yeah, it was supposed to be bad in a likeable way. My bad?
Re: a comment on self-suffocation by Phalkon	nentwined 76.167.62.172	15-Feb-07/6:55 PM
props to that.
Re: a comment on a days journey by donmiguel1960	nentwined 76.167.62.172	15-Feb-07/6:52 PM
Gotcha==a typo, only worse.
Re: a days journey by donmiguel1960	nentwined 76.167.62.172	15-Feb-07/6:51 PM
ow. not a good ow. I sympathise, but only because, er, I do get where you're coming from. But not from the art of this poem.
Re: Ode to a Pimple-Lyric Spawned by Phalkon's Greasy Face. by SupremeDreamer	nentwined 76.167.62.172	15-Feb-07/6:50 PM
hm. Do I need to make a new feature "poems inspired by this poem" sort of thing? nothing in and of itself, and I don't know Phalkon yet, so...
Re: Celui by half.italian	nentwined 76.167.62.172	15-Feb-07/6:48 PM
the last two lines are the redeeming glory, and the rest does well for being put so plainly, but... the thought's only so much.