Re: Two Cunts by mr cunt	mr cunt 85.210.206.184	25-Feb-07/6:42 PM
Great poem! Looks like you're a prize cunt... potentially associated with the user "bulgingbuttocks" by login, vote, and comment: ips users 216.190.22.200 rockmage (ips by user) newagepoet2000 (ips by user) fatmansinging (ips by user) sixtoedwonder (ips by user) flouredweevle (ips by user) assisenormus (ips by user) masticatedmess (ips by user) andyourhorsetoo (ips by user) wahwahwahwha (ips by user) gourdgrabber (ips by user) sickerofdogs (ips by user) foothangingoutofass (ips by user) smarmyfaurt (ips by user) lackoforiginality (ips by user) Isureamstupid (ips by user) bulgingbuttocks (ips by user)
Re: Wotta loada cunts by mr cunt	mr cunt 85.210.206.184	25-Feb-07/6:42 PM
What a fucking great poem about cunts!
Re: Two Cunts by mr cunt	mr cunt 85.210.205.209	25-Feb-07/6:22 PM
Wow this is fantastic! I'll vote for it myself because I am a cunt too.
Re: Sleep does my eyes by nentwined	mr cunt 85.210.205.209	25-Feb-07/6:20 PM
Shite.
Re: selfhood, through extrospection by nentwined	mr cunt 85.210.205.209	25-Feb-07/6:19 PM
Total bollox. You are clearly a cunt, even cuntier than than moron cunt Rockmage.
Re: looking for by Phalkon	Prince of Void 80.71.125.144	25-Feb-07/9:51 AM
before my pen pin down what's in my head I had stared at darkness it holds all paths for the peace it carry me away from the cybernetic world to the timeless place as i'm looking for the point on the pointless ocean i could be placeless evermore
Re: a comment on Firestorm by Dovina	Dovina 208.127.90.96	25-Feb-07/9:22 AM
Go up the ridge from Echo Mountain, Past the stand of bug-killed pine Rest your candle-eyes in manzanita For the fire creeps that way And all is well
Re: Firestorm by Dovina	Prince of Void 80.71.125.210	25-Feb-07/8:16 AM
I’m far away from the claws of the dark city I’m heading to the firestorm And the summer wind tries to creep beside me I’m going slowly against the sitting sun My eyes will be the flame of a candle The Candle burn at both ends I’m pursuing the best ends By my beginning knows my end However I’m crossing the horizons of Mysterious silence It’s more like outlook of my life
Re: a comment on Firestorm by Dovina	Dovina 208.127.90.199	25-Feb-07/6:25 AM
Perhaps the description is weak. Maybe my comparing the colors of a summer day and night in the Lower Mississippi Valley to the colors of Southern California during a firestorm in the mountains above the city “seems to have confused you.” Or you are confused as to whether you are confused. In either case, the thing is likely not apparent to someone who has never seen the two scenes, and I should make it so. It’s the differing attitudes toward normal workings of nature that’s the thing I was struck with, and wanted to convey. Many a negro maid in the South would understand if she moved to California and witnessed a firestorm; as might a borrow boy from California, awaking for the first time in Mississippi.
Re: a comment on her love fading in the haze by Prince of Void	Prince of Void 80.71.122.118	25-Feb-07/4:47 AM
you shoud not judge ..... becuase ur happiness is ur penis that's what u never understand what my lines are the lines crossed the myserty of what's inside universal mind of what's in seven skies Of what's in Caesar's hand, and Plato's brain, Of what's Lord Christ's heart, and Shakspeare's strain.
Re: The exile returns by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w	Prince of Void 80.71.122.118	25-Feb-07/4:36 AM
ur poems are adventures in the world of shit all condoms that you used in this wasteland it's no more uselful like ur cyber-shit that make u think that u are the most talented so slowly open your eyes to the entwined world that contains no more shit
Re: a comment on Firestorm by Dovina	richa 81.179.135.216	25-Feb-07/2:23 AM
If I leave aside the frankly mind boggling idea that you left for America in search of sophistication it is not the amount of colour that is the objection rather the weak description. Also you seem to have confused me. I am no more a cockney barrow boy than I am a negro maid.
Re: a comment on Firestorm by Dovina	Dovina 208.127.90.14	24-Feb-07/9:47 PM
I suppose that back in Merry Old England, you have never seen hot pink evenings, morning yellow murk, or orange nighttime ridges of the San Gabriels during a summer firestorm. It’s the way of things here, like the rising of the Thames after heavy rain, or the bloody sun rising over a Mississippi morning. Unsophisticated? Yes, it’s why we left.
Re: Firestorm by Dovina	richa 81.179.135.216	24-Feb-07/2:19 PM
I find the namechecking of all these colours a bit unsophisticated.
Re: Remembering Nick by jessicazee	richa 81.179.135.216	24-Feb-07/2:17 PM
Like this. Lots of interesting lines. Last time we kissed you had more teeth. Jellyfish are so smart.
Re: looking for by Phalkon	Dovina 208.127.90.120	24-Feb-07/10:26 AM
pointlessness, writer's block, man-as-machine - dismal topics overdone.
Re: a comment on Fuck Shelters, & fuck OutReach Court. by SupremeDreamer	half.italian 76.172.249.205	24-Feb-07/10:13 AM
I guess I didn't like some of your comments toward other posters. Maybe I was drunk that night as well. Anyway, I'm done with that, and I still don't like the poem very much. There's no form, there's no point to it, and it's just not fun to read. Find a 'poetic' approach to saying what you want to say. Rhyming, even poorly, does not equal poetry. By the way, 'er, &, 'n, lookin', livin' goin', prayin', etc, are not words. They might be excusable if the poem was meant for song lyrics. This obviously isn't. That's my three pennies. I've seen much better from you.
Re: A New Deal by oneglove	half.italian 66.77.102.10	23-Feb-07/4:53 PM
I like it. Sounds like a Dylan song.
Re: looking for by Phalkon	SupremeDreamer 68.111.43.247	23-Feb-07/3:51 PM
Four.
Re: a comment on self-suffocation by Phalkon	Phalkon 70.247.153.94	23-Feb-07/3:18 PM
at the risk of receiving further emotional suffering, i admit that line was a typo and should've read "my tendons tear apart". i would edit the poem, but i would lose all my previous votes. >_>