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Dovina replying on I WILL SURVIVE by massangel62 7 Sep 2004, 7:20 PM
Yes, that's what she is saying, and no doubt appreciates your encouraging 10.
Dovina replying on I Don't Care by ForgottenSoul17 7 Sep 2004, 7:08 PM
And just how do you reconcile a 10 vote with a comment like that?
Dovina replying on Pride by Dovina 7 Sep 2004, 7:05 PM
Have you no empathy for the femininely challenged?
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on I WILL SURVIVE by massangel62 7 Sep 2004, 6:19 PM
Your poeme is a colossal downpour of sick.
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on Into My World by sliver 7 Sep 2004, 6:14 PM
Acrusted
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on Pride by Dovina 7 Sep 2004, 6:09 PM
Being a bit of a lad, this poeme is utterly wasted on me. For fear of tainting the ballot with my ignorance, I shall vote inconspicuously -4-
klosterfobik replying on Inquietude by klosterfobik 7 Sep 2004, 5:49 PM
Thanks.
toilet
Dovina replying on Who'd suspect? by thepinkbunnyofdoom 7 Sep 2004, 11:00 AM
Oh, I hate these confusions. Would you please just be forthright. You spelled it due, so there must be something I owe you.
Dovina replying on A Poem by BigB 7 Sep 2004, 10:56 AM
The death penalty would provide Disneyland with greater realism, a more life-like experience. And failure to flush is a good place to start. It's a more serious offense than say, riding a bicycle in a bike lane while a mother with her pre-school child turns right without looking.
thepinkbunnyofdoom replying on Who'd suspect? by thepinkbunnyofdoom 7 Sep 2004, 10:48 AM
Several meaning on the due. It could refer to her blood lining the grass like dew. Or it could refer to orgasmic body fluids. All depends on your perspective and how you interpert it.
Dovina on Licking An Ashtray by Blindpoetry 7 Sep 2004, 10:46 AM
I'm exhausted. I've kissed a smoker, and it is like licking an ashtray. It's their business what they do with their health, and it's mine what I think of mine and their effect on it.
Dovina on Who'd suspect? by thepinkbunnyofdoom 7 Sep 2004, 10:39 AM
You've convince me. I'd love to. Just a few clean-ups would make your offer perfect. Please say either "will" or "can" in the third line, I'm so enamored I don't care which. And please tell me if there is something due you or if there is just dew on the grass. As for what reamins of me, that's tomorrow, this is tonight. Gosh, is my lipstick smeared?
sliver replying on Into My World by sliver 7 Sep 2004, 10:21 AM
It's not real easy to write like this, I thought it came out fairly well
Dovina replying on Into My World by sliver 7 Sep 2004, 10:02 AM
Far fetched, but some women like that sentimental stuff.
thepinkbunnyofdoom on Into My World by sliver 7 Sep 2004, 9:52 AM
Loved the Renee Blue Eyes down the side bit.
thepinkbunnyofdoom replying on Director's Cut by New Life Drug 7 Sep 2004, 9:42 AM
Okay your missing several small details, "a smile that stops me in my tracks", "And sure enough like a deleted scene The best part of our story ended up on the screen", NLD is painting with words, poetry. True it could be better but not by much. I mean the starting out with a ryhme scheme and then doing away with it utterly until the end was a little jutting at first but it was better for his narration of the thoughts and feeling being displayed.
Dovina replying on End by Dovina 7 Sep 2004, 9:41 AM
It is not how I expected I would behave. Thanks.
-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. replying on A Poem by BigB 7 Sep 2004, 9:32 AM
The following comes from the BBC 'Country Profile' for Singapore: "The country was referred to - less kindly - by the writer William Gibson as 'Disneyland with the death penalty'." I find that quote highly amusing. Apparently Singapore has a system of punishments for acts such as not flushing a public lavatory. I wonder, is it illegal to break wind in public? http://news.bbc.co.uk/1/hi/world/asia-pacific/country_profiles/1143240.stm
thepinkbunnyofdoom on End by Dovina 7 Sep 2004, 9:32 AM
Its amazing what you can do given the right circumstances. -9- <3 Jason