Dovina
replying on I WILL SURVIVE by massangel62
7 Sep 2004, 7:20 PM
Yes, that's what she is saying, and no doubt appreciates your encouraging 10.
And just how do you reconcile a 10 vote with a comment like that?
Your poeme is a colossal downpour of sick.
Acrusted
Being a bit of a lad, this poeme is utterly wasted on me. For fear of tainting the ballot with my ignorance, I shall vote inconspicuously -4-
Thanks.
toilet
Oh, I hate these confusions. Would you please just be forthright. You spelled it due, so there must be something I owe you.
The death penalty would provide Disneyland with greater realism, a more life-like experience. And failure to flush is a good place to start. It's a more serious offense than say, riding a bicycle in a bike lane while a mother with her pre-school child turns right without looking.
Several meaning on the due. It could refer to her blood lining the grass like dew. Or it could refer to orgasmic body fluids. All depends on your perspective and how you interpert it.
I'm exhausted.
I've kissed a smoker, and it is like licking an ashtray. It's their business what they do with their health, and it's mine what I think of mine and their effect on it.
You've convince me. I'd love to. Just a few clean-ups would make your offer perfect. Please say either "will" or "can" in the third line, I'm so enamored I don't care which. And please tell me if there is something due you or if there is just dew on the grass. As for what reamins of me, that's tomorrow, this is tonight. Gosh, is my lipstick smeared?
It's not real easy to write like this, I thought it came out fairly well
Far fetched, but some women like that sentimental stuff.
Loved the Renee Blue Eyes down the side bit.
Okay your missing several small details, "a smile that stops me in my tracks", "And sure enough like a deleted scene
The best part of our story
ended up on the screen",
NLD is painting with words, poetry. True it could be better but not by much. I mean the starting out with a ryhme scheme and then doing away with it utterly until the end was a little jutting at first but it was better for his narration of the thoughts and feeling being displayed.
The following comes from the BBC 'Country Profile' for Singapore:
"The country was referred to - less kindly - by the writer William Gibson as 'Disneyland with the death penalty'."
I find that quote highly amusing. Apparently Singapore has a system of punishments for acts such as not flushing a public lavatory. I wonder, is it illegal to break wind in public?
http://news.bbc.co.uk/1/hi/world/asia-pa cific/country_profiles/1143240.stm
Its amazing what you can do given the right circumstances. -9-
<3 Jason