Re: a comment on Wreck of the Poor Anchor by Dovina	Dovina 71.208.187.159	15-Jul-07/5:15 PM
Yes, and thank you for asking. You may also suggest that both men and women should be required to grow facial hair.
Re: a comment on FHjk by Dark Angle	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 86.135.203.58	15-Jul-07/5:18 AM
Would you rather I hadn't replied at all?
Re: a comment on FHjk by Dark Angle	Robert K Foster 66.66.155.241	14-Jul-07/1:43 PM
Too bad it took five years to reply to the comment. Old indeed.
Re: a comment on FHjk by Dark Angle	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 80.47.120.22	14-Jul-07/6:43 AM
As Jimmy Carr correctly pointed out: the reason old men need viagra isn't because they're impotent. It's because old women are so very ugly.
Re: a comment on Wreck of the Poor Anchor by Dovina	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 80.47.120.22	14-Jul-07/6:38 AM
May I suggest that you're a dunce.
Re: Losing you by forsaken	jerzeygirl22 68.37.7.89	14-Jul-07/6:38 AM
its not our goodbye..........your not gonna lose me
Re: a comment on Alternatives by Dovina	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 80.47.120.22	14-Jul-07/6:28 AM
No, he's thinking of a world without ethnics. So was Lenon. Imagine there's no muslims. It's easy if you dare. No need for duncely prayer matts, Or unsightly facial hair. Imagine all the normals Living for today... You may say I'm a racist But it's just a point of view. And I hope someday you'll join me Unless you're ethnic too.
Re: fear by BrendanElder	Prince of Void 80.71.124.22	14-Jul-07/2:46 AM
I Love it it's a great poem
Re: Nothingness haunts ... by Prince of Void	Prince of Void 80.71.124.22	14-Jul-07/2:42 AM
votes for despairs
Re: Settling in by INTRANSIT	some deleted user 64.140.228.24	14-Jul-07/1:53 AM
I love the imagery in this. The last stanza is really good--a great setup for the title--man and house "settling in" together.
Re: Accusation by INTRANSIT	some deleted user 64.140.228.24	14-Jul-07/1:40 AM
Very good.
Re: a comment on Lonely Soul by faded_twilight	forsaken 24.153.186.246	13-Jul-07/8:54 PM
You still out there I haven't read these you so long. Don't ask me why cause I don't either, but I'd like to hear from you?
Re: a comment on Summer Festival by Christof	xxx 67.172.190.253	13-Jul-07/6:07 PM
look at your IPS A TEN IS REGISTERED TO YOU (BLUE).
Re: Coffee House Adjacent by Enkidu	Dovina 63.251.186.252	13-Jul-07/8:49 AM
I think it would be stronger with fewer words. "then to" "to each other" "there is" - What do these add?
Re: a comment on Cotopaxi Store, Colorado by Dovina	Dovina 63.251.186.252	13-Jul-07/8:35 AM
She’s not like this girl.
Re: a comment on Cotopaxi Store, Colorado by Dovina	Dovina 63.251.186.252	13-Jul-07/8:34 AM
How about “for coffee, donut, sweet and black” for Line 7, and let the double meanings ride? Thanks.
Re: a comment on Summer Festival by Christof	Christof 62.121.23.56	13-Jul-07/7:17 AM
You're right, and on reflection I go for 'lolloping' instead.
Re: a comment on Blanket Weed by Christof	Christof 62.121.23.56	13-Jul-07/2:40 AM
Glad you enjoyed and also, in view of Dovina's comments, understood it. I thought this was one of my best until her comments came back which then made me fear it was horribly obscure, so your comment has encouraged me. I think you're right about it, and about my last things, which have all been loosening up exercises really. Though if they're Frostian loosening up exercises, I can't be too upset.
Re: Cotopaxi Store, Colorado by Dovina	lmp 141.154.134.3	11-Jul-07/3:29 PM
i like this one. i would suggest switching the order of coffee and donut in line 7; i presume the "black and sweet" refers to the coffee, not the donut. in fact, to maintain the rhyme scheme you have established, switch it to "sweet and black". line 1 refers to her baseball cap, line 2 to her khaki hat. not sure if that is too much about the hat/cap. perhaps line 1 could be "khaki cap" and figure out something else to rhyme with either line 1 or line 3. as ranger said, this has a nice flow, kind of jaunty and carefree. nice.
Re: I sang myself a soft goodbye by PsydewaysTears	Ranger 86.131.57.106	11-Jul-07/3:01 PM
I don't know if this is how it's meant, but with a little fine-tuning this would make a sweet poem for children.