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Coffee House Adjacent (Free verse) by Enkidu
Intellectuals tend to congregate And explain to each other What they already know There is a lot of laughing And the retorts are extravagant Everyone else is too busy Being stupid to give a damn There is a lot of laughing But the hugs are warmer

Up the ladder: Biased.
Down the ladder: Blackbirds III

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.6666665
Weighted score: 5.0794687
Overall Rank: 6415
Posted: July 12, 2007 12:36 AM PDT; Last modified: July 12, 2007 12:37 AM PDT
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[7] Dovina @ 63.251.186.252 | 13-Jul-07/8:49 AM | Reply
I think it would be stronger with fewer words. "then to" "to each other" "there is" - What do these add?
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