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Coffee House Adjacent

Member since 2004 · Posted 12 Jul 2007 · 1 comment

Intellectuals tend to congregate And explain to each other What they already know There is a lot of laughing And the retorts are extravagant Everyone else is too busy Being stupid to give a damn There is a lot of laughing But the hugs are warmer

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[7] Dovina 13-Jul-07/8:49 AM Reply
I think it would be stronger with fewer words. "then to" "to each other" "there is" - What do these add?