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jroday replying on The Way by Dovina 8 Jan 2005, 3:00 AM
You know I have felt like that many many times in my life. Which way should I go.
PsydewaysTears on Dying In The Corner by Zalev 8 Jan 2005, 2:43 AM
Too rightly this one hit home... pleasantly flowing and darkly satisfying. I like it a lot. •°•Gregory James•°•
PsydewaysTears on Nightmares Of Yesterday by Zalev 8 Jan 2005, 2:26 AM
The title's catchy. And I liked the intro and the final two stanzas... the rest of it though, kinda lost its flare somewhere admidst "mom said I was drunk" and "please stop my sin". Maybe I just wanted to be pulled more into your mind's reactions than just given a dictation of events.... and maybe some metaphorical images to bounce off of would've been nice too. And one of those tiny little umbrellas for my pina colada, if it's not too much trouble. •°•Gregory James•°•
Bhaskaryya on Fanboy by Blindpoetry 7 Jan 2005, 8:34 PM
Nice :)
Blindpoetry replying on Fanboy by Blindpoetry 7 Jan 2005, 2:59 PM
always traveling is sort of as an adjective.
Crakyamuni replying on Johnny football painter by Crakyamuni 7 Jan 2005, 10:01 AM
Changed it a bit, thanks for the feed back.
Crakyamuni replying on Let God Unwrite Itself by daggatolar 7 Jan 2005, 9:52 AM
This poem touches on a great deal of the metaphysical forces in written word, but in places I'm unsure of what to make of lines,(To "Stair" feelings capable of everything). It's good, feels genuine.
Dovina on Let God Unwrite Itself by daggatolar 7 Jan 2005, 6:50 AM
A good start, using rite, but at the end where you change to "write" I lost the thing that seemed well staged - that we can rite out God. You seem to introduce the notion that god was written and can be unwritten too near to the end.
Dovina on Fanboy by Blindpoetry 7 Jan 2005, 6:44 AM
Comma after Traveling?
daggatolar on The Fear of Being and will not be forever by Prince of Void 7 Jan 2005, 6:29 AM
we are eternally condemned by itself to nothingness, and for this we need not hold our selves in pain and agony over this since before death we all are helpless, but least that death is incapable of taking away from us is LIFE,lets live it in full and in meaning to make the world a better place , indeed to "REBUILDING A NEW WORLD"for the whole of humanity , this for me is my poem....
Lifeboatman on Brethren, oblivion is not the road to the city Ataraxis. by SupremeDreamer 7 Jan 2005, 4:03 AM
hehe..10
ho_hum replying on Betwixt and In Between by dougsoderstrom 7 Jan 2005, 2:54 AM
And there's more. http://www.poopreport.com/Ask/Content/whemying.html What made you think that a site called "poopreport" would give you serious lead on your "study". You have twice said that you are interested in this, but the question is why? You seem to be a very odd man.
Shuushin on Johnny football painter by Crakyamuni 6 Jan 2005, 11:22 PM
carnivorous irreparably and, what the hell, tremulant... I like the word - I don't like it there. Maybe if I knew your work better I could more easily accept the reach of it. It has a nice feel/flavor to it overall, though.
Stacy Stewart replying on Affairs by Stacy Stewart 6 Jan 2005, 11:03 PM
what is our world with out love and compassion? So w/ that being said when you find that one somebody and then they betray you we are back at square one again.... This is why I wrote the words downfall to man. As for the emotion leading up to this: "utteringthe words of complete chaos (I LOVE YOU) that ignites unholy thoughts (thinking of the other person), unveiling inner desires kept dormant in our sleep. Dreaming of worlds where the candles are lit and roses mean something to us." ( dreaming of being w/ the other person) for now the love is not drawn towards the partner but drawn towards the other person...
Crakyamuni on Johnny football painter by Crakyamuni 6 Jan 2005, 9:18 PM
typos anyone?
Dovina replying on Math Poem 3 by Dovina 6 Jan 2005, 8:47 PM
In “Math Poem - Square Root of Minus Never” maybe they’ll replace it with “fractal.” I bet they can’t wait for the next installment.
Shuushin replying on The Way by Dovina 6 Jan 2005, 8:40 PM
LoL - Yoda is Jedi. A powerful Jedi is he, yes.
Dovina replying on The Way by Dovina 6 Jan 2005, 8:37 PM
I used to hear kids say they’re not sure whether they believe and catch them figuring they might go to hell because they didn’t believe hard enough. “Help my unbelief” kinda thinking. Was Yoda Buddhist?
Shuushin replying on Math Poem 3 by Dovina 6 Jan 2005, 8:29 PM
And I think you get a prize for the most frequent use of the word "facile" in any string of comments (not that it isn't an interesting word, just kindof rarely used).
Shuushin on The Way by Dovina 6 Jan 2005, 8:22 PM
ouch - an anon one. Interesting thought. Is this a "do, or do not - there is no try" (Yoda) kinda thing? I like it - maybe we need an "aphorism" category.