Bhaskaryya
on The Day The World Blew Away by OfaRevolutionAJD
8 Jan 2005, 8:54 AM
That is NOT a glosa
Anticipation**
Could I make a request?? Next time you rate a zero on a poem, kindly leave a small comment that describes what you hated about the poem, why it sucked and why did it deserve a zero. Every poet works hard on a poem and so they never think they deserve a zero...
"Love" means many things in English. I wish we had all the Greek words with their different meanings for what we lump into "love." "Agape" comes close to your poem. Some folks are hard to love by any definition.
If you know for certain that I didn't hear kids worrying about going to hell and that I heard it from Pascal, then you are delusional, or my strict religious upbringing was all an illusion. Whatever.
I think the poem holds together on an emotional level for some who have struggled with religious belief and what it means. I am not strongly Buddhist or Taoist, but appreciate some of their philosophies.
Someday Iâll figure out how you can be so confident in knowing what I think and believe.
Do you know the Johnny Cash song "Ride On"? I think this poem strongly resembles it in that they both provoke the strongest disbelief (on my part) at the notion of either of you being closer to war than Texas. You fail. Drop and give me forty.
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Bow'ls, all of you. And you're all missing one very important detail. A cookie to whomever guesses right.
Is that a trump?
Why can't you just admit that a belch can be, and indeed often is, weak?
Hey! Funny math words!
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Jesus Christ.
Did'nt know my son was log-in already, the second blacksoul comment is mine.
As far as you are concern. You are not married, so you don't know
how to treat him until it happens to you. Don't let your imagination run wild, besides he can't do no more than she let him do. Sure you would want to kill him, but would you kill her to? my son!
Suppose a man mess around with your wife.
Do you treat him justly? my father!