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thepinkbunnyofdoom on War Story by dougsoderstrom 8 Jan 2005, 7:05 PM

"Moslem, becoming," just few typos, lots of forest gump rip offs, and a couple of rereads where spacing and metaphors, and spell check come into play

thepinkbunnyofdoom on War Story by dougsoderstrom 8 Jan 2005, 6:55 PM

Have you ever heard of the difference between a letter and a poem?

thepinkbunnyofdoom replying on Disable by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 8 Jan 2005, 6:43 PM

yes, I know typos.

thepinkbunnyofdoom on Disable by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 8 Jan 2005, 6:42 PM

Now thats original. No mistaking that for some one else's qoute, what so ever. Seriously nice parity. <3 Jason

cuddlytiger17 on The Fear of Being and will not be forever by Prince of Void 8 Jan 2005, 3:11 PM

Some of these lines don't make sense at all...might want to edit some of your grammar and "fury" is with one "r"...

cuddlytiger17 on Existential questions by kawakurdi 8 Jan 2005, 3:05 PM

Interesting, but some of your rhymes are really forced.

horus8 on The Mighty Brahmaputra by Bhaskaryya 8 Jan 2005, 12:33 PM

An ass-sandwich, holding the pickle.

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. replying on The Christ Omelette by horus8 8 Jan 2005, 12:19 PM

Yes, the one thing the Romans didn't bargain for was that Jesu would go on an egg-laying rampage after he died. They should have placed out Negroe traps. Not to harm Jesu, just to hold him in place until he could be removed.

Shuushin replying on The Christ Omelette by horus8 8 Jan 2005, 11:51 AM

Very few people know that, DA - Kydos to you. And further, since Jesus was a Negro, to this day the eggs are coloured.

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. replying on The Christ Omelette by horus8 8 Jan 2005, 11:36 AM

The egg came first. Easter is the celebration of Jesu hatching from an egg.

Crakyamuni on AL-NAAFIYSH by blacksoul 8 Jan 2005, 10:43 AM

Trite.

Crakyamuni on You have 7 hours to live... now here's the bad news by D. $ Fontera 8 Jan 2005, 10:40 AM

I think it's about Texas Hold Em. I love that game.

Crakyamuni replying on The Christ Omelette by horus8 8 Jan 2005, 10:37 AM

What came first Jesus or the egg? All unecessary blabbery aside, I think this poem is slap-and-paste poetics. One of your avg. reeds. For sneeking up on the unsuspecting I can only hope. Unfortunately blasphemy is also my arena, and well, I can rock that shit.

Blindpoetry replying on Fanboy by Blindpoetry 8 Jan 2005, 10:23 AM

thanks :-D

dougsoderstrom replying on War Story by dougsoderstrom 8 Jan 2005, 9:39 AM

Dear Zodiac: I'm not sure where your other response went......... BUT I guess it was a trump..... perhaps. Love, Doug

dougsoderstrom replying on War Story by dougsoderstrom 8 Jan 2005, 9:37 AM

Dear Zodiac: You're right..... as I have never as yet participated in a war. I was in the Marine Corps (Platoon Leader Corps) for two weeks back in 1964, but got out due to a physical ailment...... Thank God! But I did my best to pretend what war "might be like." Doug

dougsoderstrom replying on War Story by dougsoderstrom 8 Jan 2005, 9:33 AM

Good point, Shuushin. Doug

Dovina on You have 7 hours to live... now here's the bad news by D. $ Fontera 8 Jan 2005, 9:25 AM

If it's about telemarketing, the title should give some hint. It seems like you're talking about several things at once.

Bhaskaryya replying on The Mighty Brahmaputra by Bhaskaryya 8 Jan 2005, 9:11 AM

Yes, i indeed have sacrificed.....But it's just a format I wanted to try...I'm still in my experimenting age!!

Dovina on The Mighty Brahmaputra by Bhaskaryya 8 Jan 2005, 9:08 AM

I think you sacrifice too much for the rhymes - grammar, clarity, even interest.