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You have 7 hours to live... now here's the bad news (Free verse) by D. $ Fontera
Talk to me Sell me coffee and exotic flowers Let the words melt into my consciousness Now leave me alone Lie to me But please don't tell me lies Fake yourself and share it with me Abuse my senses Oh telemarket man Say whatever you can It's not that I'm needy Or impossibly greedy I just can't live living without you

Up the ladder: Lies
Down the ladder: Rebel Spirits

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Arithmetic Mean: 3.8
Weighted score: 4.8569565
Overall Rank: 10477
Posted: January 7, 2005 10:49 AM PST; Last modified: January 7, 2005 10:50 AM PST
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[5] Dovina @ 69.175.6.101 | 8-Jan-05/9:25 AM | Reply
If it's about telemarketing, the title should give some hint. It seems like you're talking about several things at once.
[5] Crakyamuni @ 131.252.229.84 | 8-Jan-05/10:40 AM | Reply
I think it's about Texas Hold Em. I love that game.
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