LintyWeenis
on Lost Soul by ChefKSP
8 Sep 2004, 3:33 PM
I don't know. I couldn't get myself to finish the whole thing.
I Will Always Feel Complete While Your In My Life.
Yep.
Are you for real?
No offence - but please try a different form of expression.Poetry is just not your cup of tea.
You'll never be talented,
You'll always ramble,
You'll want to become more than just a moron,
You'll feel better when you quit posting this crap.
I found the hidden message!Is it you markedly suck?
Stick to cooking Chef KSP!
Why is she/he screaming your name?
Is it the danger or the size of your penis?
Cunny-sexer.
Quendo
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
9 Sep 2004, 5:13 AM
I sincerely hope that this is another anonymous comment
It's open to interpretation. And who says it's a she?
Very pretty. Grows a bit stale in a couple of spots and there are some forced rhymes, but overall I like it. Been a while since I've seen you on here. Welcome back.
Wonder why she doesn't like blind dates...
The bottom line is that smoking is cool and you know it. If you damn nonsmokers would take the time to learn how to smoke, you'd realize how good it really is.
In all seriousness, though, it's not a bad poem but you really need to spell check it.
great poem,keep up the good work :D
too long - too boring?
RUN & HIDE
Jesus. You are sooooooooo good. It just amazes me. The beginning of nearly every line with "I" provides a sense of continuity that more than makes up for the disjointed yet comfortingly predictable lines. It is hard to believe that this is the work of an adolescent struggling to keep it together.
A well deserved 10
HAHAHAHAHA
Fooled ya, didn't I.
No. Sorry. I was kidding. This poem sucks. I know it's hard to bear someone telling you that but it does. It reminds me of the soppy crap of my English teacher way way way back in my freshman year of highschool: Self-righteous, cliché, and about as articulate as George Bush while talking to the cop who pulled him over for drunk driving.
A well deserved 0.
Aww. How distinctively pathetic.
Your Revealed feelings only prolongs the time till your heart is broken
once again??
What the fuck is that? I believe you meant "prolong" and not "prolongs." Actually, you might want to take that whole line out. Or maybe you want to take the whole stanza; it adds nothing to the poem. Actually, just take out the entire poem. It adds nothing to this site.