Astonishing use of "fumes" to rhyme with "perfume".

you are so weak. you are so inadequate.

what, or whom was this person "laying"?

So true. the part about the poison. Hey , do me a favor, read my poem into my world, acrostic. Tell me what you think. It made it to the top ten in less than a week. But personally, I think it's kinda weak.

This rings home for me. I've been asked to come cut down some trees from the Hayman burn area on the Eastern slope Of the Colorado Rockies(Just about 50 miles from my home). Turns out I used to picnic where these people are building a house.

Great@!!1

By posting this prayer on a public prayer ranking website, you've definitely increased your chances of getting into heaven. Well done!

Prayer is ok but have you tried heroin? Honestly it is the panacea!

nice job. when God is speaking it reminds me of a band named mewithoutYou. i found this interesting since they are christian band. it evokes good emotions and pulls the reader in. very nice.

and in which orafice were you enjoying this "cone"?

Staggering, really. And who would imagine It would do such a thing?

Beware of the ten-vote and the opposite comment. Too many commas. "Smell filled with perfume" is wordy and redundant. "happy and rejoiced" sounds funny. To feel one with nature is to use a cliche. Some good ideas needing better words.

Title sounds like a master's thesis. "hands on my heart" - like it. S2 - why not leave out the The"'s? "beloved" sounds archaic in this context.

It seems your man of thought is calling your man of action a coward. Maybe they'll duke it out. The last poem in the series really brings it home.

6 words: He's just not that into you. sorry I was looking for a place to drop that new catch phrase. I think your poetry's excellent.

You just gave me an idea. Broken bread and spilt wine as a metaphor for a woman's deflowering.

There's more to poetry than likening things to flowers, you know. And just how is friendship bigger than the sky? Nothing's bigger than the sky you idiot. Good one, though -10-

I don't like this poeme. The rhymes are rubbish. Bloody silly stuff, I'm afraid :(

Da's 10-vote either means he loves it and his comment oxymononic, or it means he hates it and his vote is to keep you off the Worst List, or he thinks 0 is higher than 10.

i loved that sermon! and i also love the poem!!