Awww..... 'tis a rare bond indeed that can be labelled as though it were never going to break.

The title's catchy. And I liked the intro and the final two stanzas... the rest of it though, kinda lost its flare somewhere admidst "mom said I was drunk" and "please stop my sin". Maybe I just wanted to be pulled more into your mind's reactions than just given a dictation of events.... and maybe some metaphorical images to bounce off of would've been nice too. And one of those tiny little umbrellas for my pina colada, if it's not too much trouble. •°•Gregory James•°•

Too rightly this one hit home... pleasantly flowing and darkly satisfying. I like it a lot. •°•Gregory James•°•

Suppose a man mess around with your wife. Do you treat him justly? my father!

Nice :)

Did'nt know my son was log-in already, the second blacksoul comment is mine.

An ass-sandwich, holding the pickle.

Sheeple like you make me proud to wolf. Anything's better than mounting the son of god Out of sheer bad writing and boredom.

Bow'ls, all of you. And you're all missing one very important detail. A cookie to whomever guesses right.

Do you know the Johnny Cash song "Ride On"? I think this poem strongly resembles it in that they both provoke the strongest disbelief (on my part) at the notion of either of you being closer to war than Texas. You fail. Drop and give me forty. -0-

"Love" means many things in English. I wish we had all the Greek words with their different meanings for what we lump into "love." "Agape" comes close to your poem. Some folks are hard to love by any definition.

Could I make a request?? Next time you rate a zero on a poem, kindly leave a small comment that describes what you hated about the poem, why it sucked and why did it deserve a zero. Every poet works hard on a poem and so they never think they deserve a zero...

Anticipation**

That is NOT a glosa

I think you sacrifice too much for the rhymes - grammar, clarity, even interest.

Better grammar would help, even where you insert a word for rhythm's sake.

If it's about telemarketing, the title should give some hint. It seems like you're talking about several things at once.

I think it's about Texas Hold Em. I love that game.

Trite.

very cute except for the last last bit. Fell apart at sowed...