Re: Milwaukee Haiku by jessicazee	Edna Sweetlove 85.211.243.133	25-Feb-08/6:31 PM
This is a lovely poem. I think you should post it at another website I sometimes go to: http://poetryaddicts.pcriot.com/forum/ - it would be much loved there as indeed would you.....
Re: Milwaukee Haiku by jessicazee	Edna Sweetlove 85.211.243.133	25-Feb-08/6:31 PM
This is a lovely poem. I think you should post it at another website I sometimes go to: http://poetryaddicts.pcriot.com/forum/ - it would be much loved there as indeed would you.....
Re: Your not my boyfriend Chuck by alvinb	Edna Sweetlove 85.211.243.133	25-Feb-08/6:32 PM
This is a fucking obscene poem. I think you should post it at another website I sometimes go to: http://poetryaddicts.pcriot.com/forum/ - it would be much loved there as indeed would you.....
Re: Trust by hobojo	Edna Sweetlove 85.211.243.133	25-Feb-08/6:33 PM
This is a passable poem. I think you should post it at another website I sometimes go to: http://poetryaddicts.pcriot.com/forum/ - it would be much loved there as indeed would you.....
Re: Ted and Fred by worldsofwar	Edna Sweetlove 85.211.243.133	25-Feb-08/6:33 PM
This is a dreadful poem. I think you should post it at another website I sometimes go to: http://poetryaddicts.pcriot.com/forum/ - it would be much loved there as indeed would you.....
Re: +Painful+ by Holy Sinner	Edna Sweetlove 85.211.243.133	25-Feb-08/6:34 PM
This is a dreary poem. I think you should post it at another website I sometimes go to: http://poetryaddicts.pcriot.com/forum/ - it would be much loved there as indeed would you.....
Re: Bumper Crop by Dovina	Edna Sweetlove 85.211.243.133	25-Feb-08/6:34 PM
This is a crappy yet lovely poem. I think you should post it at another website I sometimes go to: http://poetryaddicts.pcriot.com/forum/ - it would be much loved there as indeed would you.....
Re: Wash away my life by winniss	Edna Sweetlove 85.211.243.133	25-Feb-08/6:35 PM
This is a pathetic poem. I think you should post it at another website I sometimes go to: http://poetryaddicts.pcriot.com/forum/ - it would be much loved there as indeed would you.....
Re: Delicate hearts grow thick skins. by Nepanthe	Edna Sweetlove 85.211.243.133	25-Feb-08/6:36 PM
This is a hideous poem. I think you should post it at another website I sometimes go to: http://poetryaddicts.pcriot.com/forum/ - it would be much loved there as indeed would you.....
Re: Here are the wipes by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.	Edna Sweetlove 85.211.243.133	25-Feb-08/6:37 PM
This is a totally fabbo poem. I think you should post it at another website I sometimes go to: http://poetryaddicts.pcriot.com/forum/ - it would be much loved there as indeed would you; you would be much appreciated there.....
Re: San Franscisco by John Rambo	Edna Sweetlove 85.211.243.133	25-Feb-08/6:38 PM
This is a lovely poem. I think you should post it at another website I sometimes go to: http://poetryaddicts.pcriot.com/forum/ - it would be much loved there as indeed would you.....
Re: Sitting Alone by Edna Sweetlove	SupremeDreamer 130.65.109.104	26-Feb-08/1:52 PM
Lesbian manhater poetry? What utter rubbish. You smell like someones embrowned poop deck.
Re: Death of a Drug Addict by SupremeDreamer	Edna Sweetlove 85.211.254.47	28-Feb-08/6:59 AM
You are not fit to breathe. The only website where the horsedung you excrete might be found amusing is http://poetryaddicts.pcriot.com/forum where everyone else is also a total cunt.
regarding some deleted poem...	malpaso 70.233.166.39	4-Mar-08/4:56 AM
excellent picture of the inside-outside dichotomy of the public's obsession with beauty, fame, and personality---lohan is a public creation: image over substance every time. good work!!
Re: The Young Girl From Khartoum by Edna Sweetlove	alvinb 122.52.99.32	4-Mar-08/10:16 PM
Do your twat really smells bad???
Re: Radio Scan by Blindproject217	jessicazee 24.160.246.73	10-Mar-08/11:56 PM
I dig this. But check your punctuation...i.e. "I'll (line 11), it's (13), that's (14), it's (16), etc., and a few typos ("all the little things that I made me leave"). Dang, I'm a nitpicky editor monster now, but I only take the time because with some editing you've got something here. 8.
Re: In Limbo by Christof	jessicazee 24.160.246.73	10-Mar-08/11:57 PM
Sticky thud/hammer stuns. Totally.
Re: Absurd Robot by Nepanthe	jessicazee 24.160.246.73	10-Mar-08/11:58 PM
Make it less about you (i.e. "I") and let someone else dance to a cosmic beat. Love it. 9.
Re: The Things We Wear by jessicazee	Dovina 12.22.108.229	11-Mar-08/3:32 PM
"red rain dress" is a wonderment, maybe like me, you just walk a lot and get wet. "worm elastic" is cute. That hat wont help against rain. S4 is strange, and strangely punctuated. S5 pulls it together, except the tag is again, strange.
Re: Light show by winniss	Dovina 12.22.108.229	11-Mar-08/3:34 PM
ok, nice rhythm, ok rhyme. What's the point?