Re: loneliness untold by francis nor capule	candaliesa 67.142.130.38	29-Jan-08/12:12 PM
2 yrs later i still enjoy reading this poem... 5yrs after my divorce. and we my ("ex" and i) run into eachother. and i didn't care anymore.. the pain is still there from what he did.. but i don't carry it like i use to..
Re: The South Side of Racine, 1988 by jessicazee	some deleted user 24.243.173.248	31-Jan-08/12:00 PM
Hey, is this the Jessica that went to Park??? let me know if you are!!!
Re: Lost by alvinb	some deleted user 63.127.193.79	2-Feb-08/9:49 AM
You need to proofread this. My vote would have been higher if you had'nt voted for yourself.
Re: Six deaths by Caducus	some deleted user 63.127.193.79	5-Feb-08/7:36 PM
This is a fabulous poem. The language is impecable and each stanza has been beautifuly crafted to carry its own weight. Well done.
Re: Should have a world record by alvinb	Dovina 75.82.69.253	6-Feb-08/4:06 PM
Do you really think your tears and your heartaches are greater than any others? "Do not be surprised at the painful trial you are suffering, as though something strange were happening to you." I Pet 4
Re: Empty Eyes by Rachelle Egan	Dovina 75.82.69.253	6-Feb-08/4:07 PM
The rhymes are forced. Rwanda deserves better.
Re: Nameless Stranger (a rensaku) by gunsaku	Dovina 75.82.69.253	6-Feb-08/4:12 PM
good except penultimate stanza. Adding supernatural is a disappointment. First 5 verses are best.
regarding some deleted poem...	Dovina 75.82.69.253	6-Feb-08/4:18 PM
Yes, a good statement, not too didactic. Not bad. Can lose "as a sack" I think "ugly" can go too Line 4: "a young . . "
Re: The South Side of Racine, 1988 by jessicazee	some deleted user 24.243.173.248	7-Feb-08/7:48 PM
Jessica from Park? Let me know...didn't know I was in a poem:-0
Re: Paddling West by Dovina	some deleted user 63.127.193.79	11-Feb-08/4:33 AM
I love the epigraph--it sets the tone of the poem beautifully. Nice work.
Re: Sleep *edited by hobojo	Dovina 208.127.216.216	15-Feb-08/3:22 PM
emits sound
Re: Lost by alvinb	Dovina 208.127.216.216	15-Feb-08/3:24 PM
added - grammar
Re: Delicate hearts grow thick skins. by Nepanthe	malpaso 70.233.161.116	18-Feb-08/6:40 PM
absolutely beautiful! may fallen snow encase me.
Re: Delicate hearts grow thick skins. by Nepanthe	Crakyamuni 131.252.241.216	19-Feb-08/5:39 PM
It feels like a congregational in the church of hippie love, yes!
Re: Delicate hearts grow thick skins. by Nepanthe	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 79.65.158.244	22-Feb-08/7:37 PM
Reads like the ramblings of a toothless simpleton. Are you semi-literate, or what? Self-referential poemes are exceedingly bow'ls. But this is not. This is bum-crushingly stupid. For that you should be proud.
Re: plea bargain by malpaso	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 79.65.158.244	22-Feb-08/7:41 PM
Quality. I love the line breaks before and after "see nothing deep". How on Earth did you come up with that? Pure instinct I guess...
Re: Trust by hobojo	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 79.65.158.244	22-Feb-08/7:55 PM
This is exemplary of your talent.
Re: Absurd Robot by Nepanthe	Edna Sweetlove 85.211.243.133	25-Feb-08/6:30 PM
This is a lovely poem. I think you should post it at another website I sometimes go to: http://poetryaddicts.pcriot.com/forum/ - it would be much loved there as indeed would you.....
Re: Disengage by PoetryIsDead	Edna Sweetlove 85.211.243.133	25-Feb-08/6:31 PM
This is a lovely poem. I think you should post it at another website I sometimes go to: http://poetryaddicts.pcriot.com/forum/ - it would be much loved there as indeed would you.....
Re: Milwaukee Haiku by jessicazee	Edna Sweetlove 85.211.243.133	25-Feb-08/6:31 PM
This is a lovely poem. I think you should post it at another website I sometimes go to: http://poetryaddicts.pcriot.com/forum/ - it would be much loved there as indeed would you.....