Re: who wansa do that? by malpaso	Skamper 58.171.135.99	28-Dec-07/11:44 PM
As much as I enjoy the short poem, due to lack of true inteligence...I can't seem to get a handle on this one. There's no oomph or moment of clarity, or nod, or small smile, or any of the things that brings instant understanding of what your saying, that should come with shorter writes. "You wanna go do somethin'?" sighs "Nah" - boredom, apathy...a statement, but is it poetry? hmmm?
Re: Absorb by Skamper	INTRANSIT 69.23.157.197	29-Dec-07/6:08 AM
Strange to see you use -'cos. I don't know why. Good thing you didn't use crumpet. Those things, sheesh. I like the paralells but, I think if you sit on it for a while, there's more to be brought out.9 for what it is now.
Re: Running Local by INTRANSIT	Dovina 208.127.216.46	30-Dec-07/2:29 PM
Trucker terms, or Greek, who knows. I cycle with the biggest, rumba with the Macs. Parkour stumps me. Please, not over a fence. Fly ball and swerve on - I wont ask. Now, elope for a few on the server, I like. When ignorant, vote 7.
Re: Absorb by Skamper	Dovina 208.127.216.46	30-Dec-07/2:33 PM
Answer: Soak it up and spit it out. Good philosophy.
Re: # 2 by Lifeboatman	Prince of Void 77.237.64.43	31-Dec-07/11:09 AM
every minutes u described it was very intersting to me I like it because of this lyric is more cinematic than the others
Re: Cormac Plays by Skamper	INTRANSIT 69.23.157.197	8-Jan-08/2:06 PM
Zero Mostell. Hah! Great stuff.
Re: Voice of the World by Dovina	Prince of Void 77.237.64.89	10-Jan-08/11:14 AM
How many hopeless people are suffering ? Within the voiceless world and who’s behind this show ? who’s that child ? demonstrating the deep sense of famine in the heart of the heartless world Who’s running this world ? Why some folks can’t raise their voice ? As well as it raise so may questions In their bare minds and also abomination Far from the great expecation of human kind Could we understand how they live ? In the context of despairs Or in the mataphore of the wasteland Where you are blamed To build their worlds upon the toxic wastland And you started to obsever What they react insead of the word “ living” All they’re reactions or expermints on them It has only one message after all The show must go on for your better life and world You cant help yourself watching the opera The opear of third world Childern’re playing in the dumping ground While you try to be more sympathetic Because that’s entertaining you It’s not the reality of your life dealing with it ..it’s the dumping world and a good senior of a opera while the future is still bleak for them day after day they face their fatal fate you still dump things and they die in the dumping grave
Re: Voice of the World by Dovina	some deleted user 63.127.193.79	13-Jan-08/7:56 PM
I've read this over and over--it's still good but I feel like somthing is missing. Maybe another stanza or make stanza two the last one?
Re: Voice of the World by Dovina	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 79.73.172.29	15-Jan-08/4:00 PM
I think Kipling said it best: Take up the White Man's burden— The savage wars of peace— Fill full the mouth of Famine, And bid the sickness cease; And when your goal is nearest (The end for others sought) Watch sloth and heathen folly Bring all your hope to nought. That is why I shan't be donating.
Re: Spectrum Of Passion by Mickey Pig Knuckles	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 79.73.172.29	15-Jan-08/4:07 PM
Thank you so much for sharing your gift of literature. This is one of the excellentest poemes I have read today and it doesn't matter that it doesn't rhyme because not all poemes have to rhyme you idiot.
Re: Unemployed by OneFingerAnswer	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 79.73.172.29	15-Jan-08/4:46 PM
Couldn't He have just gone round to someone's house and cleaned up?
regarding some deleted poem...	Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199	17-Jan-08/7:44 AM
Excuse me for asking, but is this poem about Amy Winehouse?
Re: Voice of the World by Dovina	Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199	17-Jan-08/7:47 AM
I closed my eyes, until they hurt, And prayed it would go away, But when, again, I opened my eyes, This poem still looked really gay.
Re: Tyrant's Parade by MacFrantic	ThePariahDog 209.190.158.2	17-Jan-08/2:57 PM
i like this. well done!
Re: You're passionate by EAger to Offend	Dovina 208.127.216.239	17-Jan-08/4:24 PM
"Deep fascinations, shallow understanding" That ought to be everyone's goal
Re: The dumping world by Prince of Void	Dovina 208.127.216.239	17-Jan-08/4:29 PM
Answer to Question 1: none Answer to Question 2: everyone Get involved here: http://www.hopedevelopment.org/ or somewhere, else cry in your beer.
Re: Life is a moment by Prince of Void	Dovina 208.127.216.239	17-Jan-08/4:30 PM
ok, but get the grammar right, it irks me.
Re: Post-mortem by jen	Ranger 81.152.176.86	23-Jan-08/2:20 AM
I don't like cummings so a comment would be unfair.
Re: Him by hobojo	-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 87.84.68.242	23-Jan-08/11:15 AM
An aged wipe is but a paltry thing, A tattered rag upon a stick, unless Buttocks sally forth and cling, and bravely cling To every blemmish on its scrunched up mess, Nor is there parping school but studying Monuments of its own brownificence; And therefore I have sailed the seas and come To the holy city of Brownium. From "Sailing to Brownium" by William Butler Yeats
Re: Him by hobojo	Dovina 75.82.69.253	23-Jan-08/2:03 PM
Can you introduce us? I want to meet him.