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The dumping world (Other) by Prince of Void
How many hopeless people are suffering ? Within the voiceless world and who’s behind this show ? who’s that child ? demonstrating the deep sense of famine in the heart of the heartless world Who’s running this world ? Why some folks can’t raise their voice ? As well as it raise so may questions In their bare minds and also abomination Far from the great expecation of human kind Could we understand how they live ? In the context of despairs Or in the mataphore of the wasteland Where you are blamed To build their worlds upon the toxic wastland And you started to obsever What they react insead of the word “ living” All they’re reactions or expermints on them It has only one message after all The show must go on for your better life and world You cant help yourself watching the opera The opear of third world Childern’re playing in the dumping ground While you try to be more sympathetic Because that’s entertaining you It’s not the reality of your life dealing with it ..it’s the dumping world and a good senior of a opera while the future is still bleak for them day after day they face their fatal fate you still dump things and they die in the dumping grave

Up the ladder: Modern Stupidity
Down the ladder: Life is a moment

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.0
Weighted score: 5.094852
Overall Rank: 6174
Posted: January 10, 2008 11:16 AM PST; Last modified: January 10, 2008 11:16 AM PST
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[7] Dovina @ 208.127.216.239 | 17-Jan-08/4:29 PM | Reply
Answer to Question 1: none
Answer to Question 2: everyone
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