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Paddling West (Free verse) by Dovina
âThere is a candle in your heart,
ready to be kindled.
There is a void in your soul,
ready to be filled.
You feel it, donât you?â
--Rumi
Lighthouse on a glassy wave
guides a soul from tempest land
deep current summons her
to sea again
Emblems of an artisan
cultivate around her neck
disqualify from pity as
waves course through her feet
Up four flights of luring stairs
in paradox topography
each step descends
to sea again
hook lodged painlessly
inside a heedless cheek
Long dress of many patches
waves course through her feet
Too many unpatched holes
float up from hidden deep
yield to museâs care
to sea again
Skill born from lack of other skills
joins the ranks of circus freaks
unique to entertain as
waves course through her feet
Eyes fall to rumpled folds
to eyes of tea and coffee
waves of carefree hair await
To sea again
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Arithmetic Mean: 9.0
Weighted score: 5.1897035
Overall Rank: 4748
Posted: February 6, 2008 4:03 PM PST; Last modified: February 6, 2008 4:03 PM PST
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