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Sleep *edited (Free verse) by hobojo Tossing between awake and asleep
I open an eye to take a peep
As the alarm emits sound
To the dream world I'm bound
My fingers graze snooze and I fall again deep
9 minutes later it all starts again
My dream fading, no moment of zen
My feet press to floor
Open the bathroom door
I can't beleive its past ten
Up the ladder:
Forbidden Time
Down the ladder:
You're Welcome
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Posted: February 12, 2008 11:49 PM PST; Last modified: February 18, 2008 1:01 AM PSTWeighted score: 4.762871 Overall Rank: 11547 Comments:
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