poemranker ::Sleep *edited by hobojo

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Sleep *edited

Member since 2002 · Posted 12 Feb 2008 · Edited 18 Feb 2008 · 1 comment

Tossing between awake and asleep I open an eye to take a peep As the alarm emits sound To the dream world I'm bound My fingers graze snooze and I fall again deep 9 minutes later it all starts again My dream fading, no moment of zen My feet press to floor Open the bathroom door I can't beleive its past ten

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[5] Dovina 15-Feb-08/3:22 PM Reply
emits sound