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Sleep *edited (Free verse) by hobojo
Tossing between awake and asleep I open an eye to take a peep As the alarm emits sound To the dream world I'm bound My fingers graze snooze and I fall again deep 9 minutes later it all starts again My dream fading, no moment of zen My feet press to floor Open the bathroom door I can't beleive its past ten

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Weighted score: 4.762871
Overall Rank: 11544
Posted: February 12, 2008 11:49 PM PST; Last modified: February 18, 2008 1:01 AM PST
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[5] Dovina @ 208.127.216.216 | 15-Feb-08/3:22 PM | Reply
emits sound
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