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Eternal Sleep (Free verse) by brickz_pink69
As I lay in my eternal sleep I see many people weep Wondering who and why they did this But it was me I slashed my own wrists Living unhappy wishing my life would end I had no one to help me or to tend I was unhappy didnt you see Now you regret ever abusing me Then that night when i came home I tried to repair the heart that was unsown I know it was unfaithful and I know it was a sin But how can I kill the pain that's within

Up the ladder: Alone
Down the ladder: ONLY POETRY IS FOREVER

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Arithmetic Mean: N/A
Weighted score: 4.762871
Overall Rank: 11480
Posted: December 23, 2007 6:54 AM PST; Last modified: December 23, 2007 6:54 AM PST
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