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+Painful+ (Free verse) by Holy Sinner I'm going to smile
Like nothings wrong
Talk like every things
Perfect.
Act like its all a dream.
And pretend it's not
Hurting me!!!
Up the ladder:
Mirror
Down the ladder:
Twilight of the Mind
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Posted: February 18, 2008 12:31 AM PST; Last modified: February 18, 2008 12:31 AM PSTWeighted score: 5.1897035 Overall Rank: 4743 Comments:
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Edna Sweetlove @ 85.211.243.133
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25-Feb-08/6:34 PM
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This is a dreary poem. I think you should post it at another website I sometimes go to: http://poetryaddicts.pcriot.com/forum/ - it would be much loved there as indeed would you.....
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