| Re: Snow by lil_evil_boi |
sacred_poet_me 70.68.76.244 |
6-Jun-05/5:20 PM |
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| Re: True Love by lil_evil_boi |
sacred_poet_me 70.68.76.244 |
6-Jun-05/5:22 PM |
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You really described 'love' well. ANd the rhyming really emphasize the point. I think this is the best poem I have ever read since i registered on this website. Your work is thoughtful and I can see your ideas and thoughts in it. Bravo!
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Dovina 69.175.32.185 |
6-Jun-05/5:24 PM |
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If you post a quote from the King James Version, credit is in order.
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| Re: To you by sk8rs_rule_all |
some deleted user 70.68.76.244 |
6-Jun-05/5:32 PM |
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| Re: Smoky Mountain High by Dovina |
some deleted user 70.68.76.244 |
6-Jun-05/5:32 PM |
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| Re: The Comedy of Mighty Rockmage: Combatting Old Age. by Don-Quixote |
some deleted user 70.68.76.244 |
6-Jun-05/5:33 PM |
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I find this uninteresting. You should put more thought into it.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
sacred_poet_me 70.68.76.244 |
6-Jun-05/5:34 PM |
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| Re: The world's shortest poem by ALChemy |
sacred_poet_me 70.68.76.244 |
6-Jun-05/5:35 PM |
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Short but meaningful. SOmetimes a few words (in this case 2) can really express the author's feeling well. This poem is a good example. Good!
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| Re: Smoky Mountain High by Dovina |
untamed_fierce 70.68.76.244 |
6-Jun-05/5:35 PM |
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NAHH...this is not good. Not at all. You should be ashamed!
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| Re: Bunnies crazy inlove by kev_wannabe |
sacred_poet_me 70.68.76.244 |
6-Jun-05/5:38 PM |
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| Re: Soldier by kev_wannabe |
sacred_poet_me 70.68.76.244 |
6-Jun-05/5:39 PM |
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Comparing to 'Bunnie Crazy In Love' this one kinda suck...no offense, but I find this poem uninteresting and lacks interests. You should try to spice it up a little. This masterpiece shows that sometimes great poets can write unpowerful poems too. But, good try!
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| Re: Bunnies crazy inlove by kev_wannabe |
some deleted user 70.68.76.244 |
6-Jun-05/5:42 PM |
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My name does not fit with this poem. You should be ashamed of your failure. This piece does not run smoothly and I actually fell asleep while reading it (not exaggerating). It lacks interest and the repetition does not fit in this poem. Better luck next time!
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
shrutikay 219.65.87.162 |
7-Jun-05/2:12 AM |
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shrutikay 219.65.87.162 |
7-Jun-05/2:31 AM |
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can v take bak..r votes...bcoz..if wat dovina says is rite..i so wud want 2 give u a -ve score here
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shrutikay 219.65.87.162 |
7-Jun-05/2:37 AM |
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rnt ppl on this site..a bit 2 critical....neways..gud effort...shud get a 7 least
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wFraser Allonby Q.C.w 195.157.153.249 |
7-Jun-05/4:15 AM |
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| Re: return(wuthering heights) by shrutikay |
some deleted user 81.69.23.196 |
7-Jun-05/4:16 AM |
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There's not much Bronte feel to be detected here. Then what's the use of mentioning your source of 'inspiration'? Anyway, the first stanza has some style but both >>coz<< and the fading dots spoil whatever gothics there are.
And it's 'grievances'.
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| regarding some deleted poem... |
some deleted user 81.69.23.196 |
7-Jun-05/4:27 AM |
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He/she is making it easy. Just stear your mouse around l_e_b postings from now on, forcing him/her to entre with a new username again and again. The rip-offs are often easily detected by feeding Google with a line from the 'poems'.
He/she obviously isn't aware that plagiarism is a felony. People like him/her think they are safe behind their IP wall. They aren't.
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| Re: he's leaving by eliznhaz |
Dan garcia-Black 66.159.232.19 |
7-Jun-05/8:32 AM |
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I think it's kinda sweet in an innocent way. You could stand to lose the "leave" in line 2 and "I'll want to die" in the last line. Maybe something less cliche and dramatic than 'cry and I'll want to die." But your poem is not a waste of a read.
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Dovina 69.175.32.185 |
7-Jun-05/9:24 AM |
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