some deleted user
on To you by sk8rs_rule_all
6 Jun 2005, 5:32 PM
Enjoyable...
I like it.
some deleted user
on The Comedy of Mighty Rockmage: Combatting Old Age. by Don-Quixote
6 Jun 2005, 5:33 PM
I find this uninteresting. You should put more thought into it.
its good
Is this not a blatant rip-off?
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There's not much Bronte feel to be detected here. Then what's the use of mentioning your source of 'inspiration'? Anyway, the first stanza has some style but both >>coz<< and the fading dots spoil whatever gothics there are.
And it's 'grievances'.
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
7 Jun 2005, 4:27 AM
He/she is making it easy. Just stear your mouse around l_e_b postings from now on, forcing him/her to entre with a new username again and again. The rip-offs are often easily detected by feeding Google with a line from the 'poems'.
He/she obviously isn't aware that plagiarism is a felony. People like him/her think they are safe behind their IP wall. They aren't.
WOW! I'm speechless!
You really described 'love' well. ANd the rhyming really emphasize the point. I think this is the best poem I have ever read since i registered on this website. Your work is thoughtful and I can see your ideas and thoughts in it. Bravo!
If you post a quote from the King James Version, credit is in order.
BOO!!
Short but meaningful. SOmetimes a few words (in this case 2) can really express the author's feeling well. This poem is a good example. Good!
NAHH...this is not good. Not at all. You should be ashamed!
WOW. You're good!
Comparing to 'Bunnie Crazy In Love' this one kinda suck...no offense, but I find this poem uninteresting and lacks interests. You should try to spice it up a little. This masterpiece shows that sometimes great poets can write unpowerful poems too. But, good try!
My name does not fit with this poem. You should be ashamed of your failure. This piece does not run smoothly and I actually fell asleep while reading it (not exaggerating). It lacks interest and the repetition does not fit in this poem. Better luck next time!
can v take bak..r votes...bcoz..if wat dovina says is rite..i so wud want 2 give u a -ve score here
rnt ppl on this site..a bit 2 critical....neways..gud effort...shud get a 7 least
I think it's kinda sweet in an innocent way. You could stand to lose the "leave" in line 2 and "I'll want to die" in the last line. Maybe something less cliche and dramatic than 'cry and I'll want to die." But your poem is not a waste of a read.
Please look up Hebrews 11:1 in the King James Version of the Bible or go here:
http://www.biblegateway.com/passage/?boo